Dragon's Lair

Writer's Fan fiction

Dragon Ball Z/Family Ties

To whom it my concern, here’s a few key pointers on who’s who and what’s what: WPW-Writers Personal Words, Intro-Introduction, Nar-Narator,AV-Announcers Voice, C.O.P-Crowd Of People, SS-Super Saiyan, Phase-Ph,[ ]-Caption

WPW:
‘First things first, I do not claim to know everything or own any part of the Funimation or the Franchise. But I do claim this particular storyline and its many wide ranged of new characters.

Such main characters as Deannar, Nala, Deeja, Zean-la Dannar. The rest are; Franok, Saracus-tran, Sasha-tran, Soleena, Velcree, Wanaka, Kulp, Myra, Pardda, Rude-Jack, Bola, Hy, Lo, Mistress Kai and her entire crew, Eider, Iccaniods, Breezer, Crystal, Frost, Chiller, Isis, Glacier, Artic, Genneva, and Vegeta Prime.

I have also created other worlds. The Planet’s Naidacon and Vegeta II. It’s because I think Dragon Ball Z is not just for now…it’s forever.

This is a story I created for anyone and everyone who loves Dragon Ball Z as much as I do. I hope you enjoy reading this first tale I’ve written because I sure enjoyed writing it.

Before I start my tale spun from Universal Realms, let me first give you a brief summary of what Universal Realms consist of. Universal Realms is a nexus point that sits in the center of a universe I call The Omega-verse.

Universal Realms has infinite access portals to many different known universes like the DC, Marvel, Dark Horse, Top Cow and even Dragon Ball Z. But there is a slight catch; there are going to be some minor differences.
The universes you will enter are alternate, dimensional realities that’s going to take and push your imaginations pass their normal limitations.

For instance, what if Goku didn’t learn the Instant Transmission Technique from the strange Yadrottojin race, but secretly from some place else? And the truth was even hidden from himself by greater powers far above his own.

In this adventure, those answers will be told and new blood will be introduced and a lot of old blood re-introduced into this D.B.Z. dimensional universe.

Intro:
[UNIVERSAL REALMS now drifts into an alternate Dragon Ball Z dimensional reality; where the saiyan prince Vegeta gave his life for his friends, family and most of all for his new home called earth. It was freely given to stop a terrible destructive force named Majin Buu, but to no avail it didn’t work.]

Buu still terrorized earth and its people. But earth had other protectors like Goku, Gohan, Goten and Trunks together the two pint sized heroes formed Gotanks. They also had their chance at stopping Buu but they weren’t strong enough. The only thing that stopped the pink menace was the combined powers of Goku and Vegeta.

An Elder Kai gave the two of them his mystical earrings, which fused the two saiyans forming a mighty creature called Vegeto. Just when Vegeto, the two combined saiyans was beating Buu, in a last ditched effort he absorbed them and when he did, they’d somehow been separated inside the mainstream of Buu’s body.

While inside their saiyan pride got in the way and then both of them decided to stay that way. They destroyed the elder Kai’s earrings and choose to fight or die by their own sense of pride. Vegeta destractected Buu in a futile fight while Goku prepared a Spirit Bomb.

At this time earth and many of the other planets where being wished back by the Dragon Balls and Goku found out after his first failure at a Spirit Bomb that he needed more power to destroy Kid Buu. So not only did this earth give power to save the day, their entire galaxy lend a helping hand.

[WE now do a quick back track about some thirty years back to another part of the universe far, far away where my imaginative story begins. A time when Freiza ruled many races of species, including the proud saiyans.

This was even before Bardock, father of Goku; tried to avenge the deaths of his fallen crew and to stop the destruction of his home planet which he fore saw in a vision; in thus confronting his lord and master.

Bardock was not strong enough to do any damage to Freiza. So Freiza destroyed him and his home world nonetheless. And in doing this Freiza thought he’d rid himself of the civilization of Vegetains, whose power in time would’ve soon rivaled his own, if not put in check.

But Bardock’s group wasn’t the only saiyans to go on missions for Freiza, which they thought was hard. Little did any of them know that those missions they were being sent on were suicide missions.

In this reality Bardock had another son; his name was Deeja. He and Radditz was only two years apart in age and looked a lot alike, except Radditz wore his hair loose down his back while Deeja kept his in a frizzy long pony-tail.

Deeja was a twenty-four year old team leader and he led one of these missions to a planet he knew nothing about. Only that it was suppose to be eradicated by the order of lord Freiza. And with no questions asked he and his six crew members, Pardda thirty-one, his little sister Myda twenty-five, Hi and his twin brother Lo twenty-eight, Rude Jack thirty-seven and Bola; a thirty-three year old female behemoth. All of them were either older or larger than Deeja but none of them could match nor equal him in power. Freiza was sending them to a world he knew all too well. Even he himself wouldn’t dare go there and try and take it over for a second time. The planet was called Naidacon.

On Naidacon, their lowest level fighter gave Freiza more trouble than he could handle. The only way he could survive the battle was to flee and live too fight another day. Freiza knew for a fact that the simple-minded saiyans would rather stay and die than accept defeat and surely meet their end on the planet’s surface. An when the arrival of their demise reached the planet Vegeta that they lost their lives in battle. No one on their home world would suspect a thing and that fit Freiza’s plans like a glove.

UNIVERSAL REALMS/ D.B.Z. UNIVERSE GLADLY PRESENTS…DRAGON BALL Z’S ‘FAMILY TIES’
written and created by QUENTIN R. MILTON

CH: 1
TO CONCOUR A WORLD

AV:
[“SOME TIME LATER, THE SMALL GROUP OF SEVEN SAIYANS LANDS ON THE GAINT PLANET’S SURFACE AND IMMEDIATELY STARTS TO ATTACK THE BULIDING STRUCTURES AND ITS INHABITANTS FROM THE AIR.”]

The building the saiyan’s blasts hit only caused minimal damage while the planets’ inhabitance avoided their power burst of energy or simply swats them aside harmlessly like rubber beach balls.

Deeja:
(“What is going on here? Their power levels are almost none existent, but their skill and speed is uncanny.”) Deeja wonders as checks his scouter and noticed that their power levels were low and stops firing.

Parrda:
“Hey Deeja isn’t there something wrong with this picture?” Parrda says moving close to his friend and leader as they both descend to the ground.

Deeja:
“My sentiments exactly Pardda. We have attacked these creatures and they just avoid us, an do not return fire as if we are not even here.”

Parrda:
“Yeah, and that’s not the spooky part. Usually when we attack someone they at least run or try an fight back. These creatures do neither.”

Deeja:
“Yes, I know. Every fiber in my being is telling me to get the hell out of here.”

Parrda:
“Well to hear that coming from you Deeja is a first and very troubling.”

Nar:
Hy and Lo flies in close and lands next to them…

Hy:
“Hay boss, about this mission, I’m starting to get a really bad feeling about it.”

Lo:
“I second that.”

Deeja:
“Well before you two ladies start pissing your panties. You must realize that we are saiyans and-” Deeja is cut short by his scout tracker beeping loudly then continues, “-Power levels! Huge ones and headed this way fast!”

Nar:
The rest of Deeja’s crew stopped firing abruptly and came out of the sky an lands around him. They we’re all shocked on how much power was headed their way.

Deeja:
“Bola, get a direct count of this army that is on its way here.”

Bola:
“On it boss.” Bola taps the side of her scouter twice and it read no army, only two bodies were in route. And with knowing this her shock deepen as she pauses…

Deeja:
“Well Bola, do not just stand there with your mouth open woman! Tell me what it reads!” Deeja says demanding an answer.

Bola:
“I think my scout tracker is malfunctioning. You better check yours to get a correct reading.” And in doing so Deeja notices…

Deeja:
“Eighteen-thousand!”

Bola:
“Yeah, I knew mine was broken. A few seconds ago it only read ten thousand and two bodies.”

Deeja:
“The reason for that Bola is because their power levels are continually rising. And you we’re correct, there are only two bodies approaching us.” Deeja says with his finger still on the side of his face holding his scouter button down.

Myra:
“But Deeja, that is impossible!” Myra shouts looking in its direction.

Deeja:
“Apparently not. All of you check your trackers. Then know the truth that men lie and our technology…do not.”

Nar:
When they all finished their readings, the crew now stood speechless and knew…

Rude Jack:
“Deeja, you know that we are already beaten, do you not?” Rude Jack folds his arms.

Deeja:
“Yes and I also know that with even all our powers combined will only add up to twenty thousand. An theirs has stopped at twenty-two thousand each and from the looks of that…by choice.” Deeja said without blinking.

Parrda:
“Well Dee, you’re the boss. What do you say?” Parrda looked back at Deeja.

Deeja pauses for a second and then speaks…

Deeja:
“We stay, but if any of you wants to run back home with your tails between your legs, then be my guest.” Deeja said as he powers up and flies headfirst into the arms of death without looking back.

Parrda:
“Are you coming Myra?” Parrda looked down at his little sister while powering-up in a bright orange flash. “VHIZZZ!”

Nar:
She stares straight ahead not answering and powers up to her maximum and quickly tries to catch up with Deeja. Pardda then grew a faint smile and followed his little sister. Hy and Lo looked directly at each other and at the same moment looked ahead of them powering up saying at the same time saying with a big smiles…

Hy/Lo:
“Hey guys! Wait for us!”

Nar:
As they too take flight, Rude Jack and Bola simple powers-up.

Rude Jack:
“Hey Bola, you want to live forever?”

Bola:
“If it’s not doing what I do best, no way Rude Jack.” The two say as they blast themselves into the sky a long side each other.

Nar:
The seven saiyans made their own choices to say and fight. The battle was fought by the best of their ability, but the fight didn’t last no more than twenty minutes. Deeja and his entire crew was soon inches away from death’s door as a blue-gray armor-plated warrior was about to lay waste to the half dead saiyans. That was until a lone voice came out of nowhere…

A loud echoing voice:
“STOP!”

Deeja barely heard that request from the strangers’ voice for the loud ringing in his ears. He strained and struggled just to lift his head in its direction. Deeja’s blurry eyes soon focused and noticed an old, bald, dark tanned man standing with a tall stick shrouded in common clothes. The lead gray and blue armored warrior asked…

Saracus-tran:
“Why Dannar? If the field was in reverse, they would have surely killed us all.”

Dannar:
“Why Saracus-tran? Was it not long ago that you were not so different than these would be attackers? Your people the Arcadians were head strong, proud, ruthless, and most of all a misguided race. Besides, we did have an agreement, did we not?”

Deeja:
“Stop…Y…you’re babbling fools! A…and give us…Ugh…the proper deaths as true saiyan warriors…deserve!” Says the mortally wounded Deeja.

Dannar:
“Is death what you crave boy?”

Deeja:
“No, we do not crave death…old man. It is victory…or death, so says Lord…Freiza!”

Dannar:
“Freiza? Did you say…Freiza?” Dannar said as his tight eyes opened as far as they could and that was about an inch wide.

The young saiyan turned his head and looked into the eyes of the Arcadian warriors Saracus-tran. Saracus-tran then turns his head towards the young broken saiyan Deeja and squats down close to his face…

Saracus-tran:
“You were not the only one who has killed or even died in his name young one.”

With a surprised look on his face, Deeja asked…

Deeja:
“You?”

Saracus-tran:
“Yes boy but not just myself, my entire world serviced him. And with that service Freiza sent a group of twenty Arcadian finest troops here to eradicate this world’s population. When we arrived here our siege began quick and swift, and were meet with a resisting force much like the one you and your crew was greeted by. It was three Vanperiums and they crippled the twenty of us in lesser time than you were. If it were not for Dannars' warm heart the Vanperiums would have surely destroyed us all, just as we would surely have destroyed you. Dannar sent half of us back to Freiza with a massage; it was a challenge. If he could defeat Dannar weakest pupil in single combat he would tell Freiza a secret, which would make him a hundred times stronger than he already was. But if he is defeated, to never set foot in this side of the galaxy ever again. Freiza gladly accepted because he knew who he would be fighting in battle and that Dannars' would be champion was no one other than me.”

Deeja:
“Traitor!!”

Saracus-tran:
“Call me what you like pup, but Dannar gave me something Freiza never did. A choice. A choice to live free and too earn that freedom I had to beat Freiza in single combat. I thought for me to beat Freiza was madness. Just thinking about it made me laugh. Then Dannar asked me why did I think he sent me here? It was not to prepare this word for him. It was to die and that my race was not the first to come to this world. There were many species sent here under Freizas' order to die but did not know of it. Just look around you.”

Saracus-tran reached behind Deeja neck and grabbed the back of his cracked saiyan armor, an lifted him off the ground with one arm. Deeja's eyes saw more races and different species than he had fingers and toes, while all the while they all looked back at him.

Saracus-tran:
“Yes young one, these beings you see were all part of Freiza's service many, many years ago. And for each of their services they all became a bit stronger. Freiza notice their true range in evolution and to him their existence had to be erased. So he sent them to a place where none of his fighters have never ever returned from…here.
Within ten long years Dannar trained me in ways that I thought would surely die. But I did not; I endured and gotten strong, very strong. I did not know how powerful I was until I fought with my old dark hearted Lord. When Freiza finally arrived the battle started immediately. He tried ever dirty trick he could imagine. But Dannar trained me well and I defeated him on all three levels of his power. When he ran out of ideas he tried to destroy this world with his most deadly of attacks, which looked much like a small sun. I did not think I could stop it, so I looked to Dannar for advice from a distance. He looked back at me and said nothing, then smiled and walked away. I then turned back to the miniature star of destruction and armored up to my highest level, six.
And surprisingly I snatched the energy ball out of the sky, and threw it into space with ease. This showed Freiza that his power was now obsolete. An in witnessing that event he quickly turned tail and ran for his life for in all, it was mine to take. But Dannar spared him; he stopped me from making chase of my prey and destroying him.”

Deeja:
“Lies…all lies!” Deeja said as loud as he could.

Saracus-tran:
“Hump! Believe what you want stripling but that is the truth. And the power I used on you and your people was only half of level one.”

Dannar:
“Yes young warrior, Saracus-tran words rings true and to live free or die is your choice and yours alone.” Dannar says keeping a wrinkle smile.

Saracus-tran lowers Deeja to his feet and while he did Deeja tried to stand but four badly fractured ribs and seven broken wouldn’t let him. He fell on his left knee and right hand as he held the left side with his left arm that was in the most pain. Deeja looked over his fallen crew and thought long and hard…

Deeja:
(“My men and I, we fell so easily in battle. What a disgrace we all are. Those two fighters tossed us about as if we were mere playthings, all because of a decade or more of training under this creature, Dannar. I think that this shriveled up old man is more than what he appears to be.”) Deeja then looks back at the ever so growing crowd of creatures around him and thinks to himself some more, (“To have these creatures defeated and made out into a more powerful image.”) Then another thought struck solid inside his head, (“Maybe this Dannar can train my crew and I. An maybe when the time is right we will all become stronger than our previous selves and when that happens this planet will fall in Lord Freiza's name. And every one of these costumed freaks will taste the bitterness of defeat.”)

Saracus-tran:
“So boy, have you come to good senses?” Saracus-tran’s armor melts back to where it began; to a small square patch of metal on his chest. A weak feeble smile entered Deeja's scared battle beaten face.

Deeja:
“That…I have…tin man…and speak for the…rest of my…people as well. We accept your offer…of freedom. Now…name your price.”

AV:
[“DEEJA KNEW FOR SUCH A GENEROUS GIFT, IT WOULDN’T COME FOR FREE. WHAT WILL IT COST THE SEVEN MISPLACED SAIYANS? WELL, YOU WILL JUST HAVE TO FIND OUT ON THE NEXT DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

CH: 2
REBIRTH
AV: [“WITHOUT ANY MORE WORDS SARACUS-TRAN LOOKED TO DANNAR WITH A SMILE AN SAYS…”

Saracus-tran:
“I have paid my debt to you Dannar. Now will you honor your part of the bargain?”

Dannar:
“Yes Saracus, your debt is paid and you will receive what you desire within the time of your choosing as I promised.” Dannar says while bowing his head in Saracus-tran direction. Soon after Saracus-tran bows back and then walk away. “Now young warriors-” Dannar says pausing and then continues, “-your price will be ten- no, twenty years as my pupils. Agreed?”

And that offer suited Deeja’s plan perfectly…

Deeja:
“Agreed, anything…you say…tanned one. You…have us at your…disposal.”

Dannar:
“Gooood-verrry gooood.” Dannar says as he grew a big wrinkle smile from ear to ear. Then he quickly yells, “Zean-la, come here! Your services are needed!”

From a distance a young tanned skin, solid white haired girl came running…

Zean-la:
“I am on my way Dannar!” And when she arrives…

Dannar:
“Take good care of our guest Zean-la.”

Zean-la:
“Yes Dannar and when I am finished?”

Dannar:
“Lead them to Mount Misery. They will start they’re training today.”

Zean-la:
“Yes Dannar, right away.” The teenaged girl approached Deeja first and then placed her hands over his back…

Deeja:
“What…are you…doing girl?” Deeja says as he leans forward, trying to get his feet.

Zean-la:
“Hold still you!” Zean-la hands began to glow a loud green color, then finishes, “Or the healing process will be very painful.” Within thirty seconds Deeja’s ribs and badly bruised body was completely healed. The female youth stood to her feet saying, “There, all better.”

Deeja slowly rose to his feet in shock while the large crowd of creatures went about their everyday business.

Deeja:
“That made me feel even better than the rejuvenation chambers on Vegeta.”

Zean-la:
“Vee…gee…ta? Is that the name of your home world?”

Deeja:
“That girl is none of your concern. Do as your master says and heal the rest of my crew. There is much training to be done.”

Zean-la:
“He is not my master. He is my father.”

This news shocked Deeja…

Deeja:
(“His daughter?”) Deeja says inside his mind.

Zean-la:
“And the words for my help are thank you.” The young woman says with a mean look on her face as she quickly moves to her next patient while saying to herself, (“Stupid boy.”)

And at the same time Deeja thinks…

Deeja:
(“Silly girl.”)

Soon after Zean-la finish healing the rest of Deeja’s crew. The small group of saiyans gather in a circle away from Zean-la and before Deeja could utter one word about his plan to his crew. He stops and pauses and notices that Zean-la has made herself part of their circle. At the same time they all look at her…

Deeja:
“Do you mind!?!” Deeja says loudly.

Zean-la:
“Mind what? Zean-la asks with a sincere look upon her face.

Deeja:
“Mind giving my crew and I some privacy?”
Zean-la:
“O-sorry.” Zean-la says backing away but not far.

Deeja then tells his crew of what he had on his mind when their training is complete, an when he was finished…

Deeja:
“We are all ready now for our training girl, so lead us to this…Mount Misery.”

Zean-la:
“You will get there when I am finished with you and my name is Zean-la. Our next stop will be the dinning hall. You must eat before training can begin.”

Deeja:
“You have healed us girl that is more than enough. Now lead us to your father, so that we may begin.”

Zean-la:
“I will-” The young girl says as she tightens her fist while her natural hazel-green eyes began to glow dark green. The team of seven saiyans began to slowly fall to their knees in great pain as she continued talking, “-prepare you first for your training, if you want me too or not!”

The small group wounds reopened…

Zean-la:
“I am the one who gave you your health back and I can also take it away. So, are you going to do as I say or not?”

With one hand and knee on the ground Deeja uses the other to hold his ribs into place while shakily trying to hold his head up towards Zean-la. And when he does…

Deeja:
“Al…alright! Just lead the blasted…way girl…and we…wi…will follow!”

Zean-la:
“Good.” Zean-la says without a smile.

Zean-la then re-heals them all as her eyes change from dark green to a softer glowing sea green. Soon as Zean-la was finished, she quickly turns and walks towards the dining area. While Deeja and his team picked themselves off the ground…

Parrda:
“I think she likes you Dee.”

Deeja:
“Humph, that will be the day Pardda.” Deeja says as the rest of his crew tries hard not to laugh.

Nar:
As the years passed, the saiyans trained long and hard inside a place they each got to know well…a place called Mount Misery. Mount Misery’ was a fifteen thousand foot mountain with seventy-two levels of training rooms inside of it. In each chamber going up the gravity became ten times stronger than the last. The outside was built by nature but the inside was constructed by the being known as Dannar, someone who was far more powerful than any creature on Naidacon. The inner chamber was virtually indestructible; no matter how much power was thrown at it could not be scratched.

Within three more years now past Dannar trained and oversaw the seven saiyans very closely. He watched as they went up level after level and saw how they achieved feats that many creatures could not. And that was reaching level seventeen within those short years. Well all except one of them. It was their saiyan leader, Deeja. At the age of twenty-seven he was now on level twenty-two. A level where two hundred and twenty times gravity wrapped heavy around his body. Inside this one hundred and ninety-foot room he struggles to keep his every moment perfect. But every punch and each kick was pure agony. At the movement of passing out, he would stop and regroup himself then begin again. Deeja strive for nothing but the best and to himself, he knew he had a long road ahead of him. As days went on Deeja didn’t sleep in his assigned quarters. He ate and slept on this level until it was done with him.

One morning while in training Deeja didn’t know he was being watched and standing in the darkened entrance was Dannar. He stood there looking, observing and waiting. Waiting for something very terrible to happen and only he knew the danger, an hasn’t told a soul; not even to his own daughter. She has now quietly crept up from behind him but was clearly noticed before she began to speak in a low whisper…

Zean-la:
“Is there something troubling you father?”

Dannar:
“No my dear, nothing I cannot handle.” Without turning to greet his daughter he then adds, “Besides you worrying about me. Why are you not on level thirty-seven and here on twenty-two?”

Zean-la:
“I just came down to see how your new recruit was faring.”

Dannar:
“Faring my dear?” Dannar asked then answered his own question, “Quite well. These saiyans are remarkable creatures. They have more capability than even they can fathom. Just look at this one, he has mastered twenty-one levels and is nearly complete with this one.” But Zean-la’s attention was caught by Deeja’s movements long before her fathers’ request and he knew it, “I know you feel for him my daughter.”

Zean-la:
“Father, how could you say something like that?” Zean-la says acting surprised.

Dannar:
“I was just teasing you my dear-,” Dannar laughs softly and adds, -“now do not stand here talking to an old man. Go, go and train with him. Show him his weaknesses, so he can quickly repair them in his own way and time.”

Zean-la slowly took her eyes off Deeja and takes one step forward, then turns her head and holds eye contact with her father.

Zean-la:
“How long have you known?”

Dannar:
“I have known for three years to this day Zean-la. The first time you made contact with him but you do know our laws my child. If you want him, you must be prepared to trade your life for his. Because The Day of Tayken draws near.”

Zean-la:
“I know our laws well father and understand the risks that are involved. I am ready for The Day of Tayken.”

Dannar:
“Good-very good. Then my daughter, go and teach him more of our ways.”

Zean-la:
“Yes father.” Zean-la enters level twenty-two while her father turns an walks away into the darkness.

Deeja pauses in mid training, an without turning around…

Deeja:
“What is it now girl? Do you not see that I am in training?”

Zean-la:
“Oh, so that is what you call this dance?” Zean-la said while placing her hands on her hips.

Deeja:
“Dance! This is no dance girl! It is a none stop strenuous exercise to hone my abilities to perfection.”

Zean-la:
“Oh really, then prove it. Show me how perfect your fighting skills are.” Zean-la says as she steps into a fighting stance while Deeja’s tail wrapped itself around his waist as if it had a mind of its own.

Deeja then he turned and faces her an jumps into a fighting stance of his own…

Deeja:
“Do not expect me to go easy on you, just because you are part of the female race here.”

Zean-la:
“By the great moonless nights, ignorance is bliss with you saiyan.” With her words finished the battle begins. Deeja started first by firing a solid blast of energy from the center of his left hand. (Zapping sound.) Zean-la dodged his blast and it hit the mountain wall causing no damage. The two fought hard and fast for twenty minutes but no harm came to either opponent. This angered Deeja, so he quickly disengaged their fight by jumping back about ten feet.

Deeja:
“Blast you, woman! Fight me! I know you are stronger than this. I can sense your power and you are much stronger by far. Now, if you are going to insult me more, then you can leave faster than you came inside this level!” Deeja then folds his arms and turned his back to Zean-la.

Zean-la:
“Well, well when you first arrived here you needed machinery to know a person’s power level. Maybe you have improved.” Zean-la says with a most serious look on her face while she strengthens her fighting stance and power level, “But if rough is how you like it, then turn around and face me saiyan.”

And just then Deeja feels that familiar tug in the pit of his stomach and senses in the depths’ of his brain that Zean-la’s power level was slowly rising higher and higher. He then turns back around and faces Zean-la once more.

Deeja:
“Now that is more like it.” Deeja powers-up and prepares himself for a real challenge, “Now girl, show me what you are really made of.”

Suddenly Zean-la’s body jerked forward so fast and swift that to Deeja’s naked eye, her body was a blur. What came next was a sharp pain in his stomach.

Zean-la:
“Like I said a thousand times over.”

Nar:
When Deeja’s eyes and head focused downward he saw Zean-la’s fist was buried in his stomach knocking almost all the wind out of him. While pulling her fist out of his abdomen Zean-la takes a few steps back as Deeja tries to shake off the shock and pain of her power.

Zean-la:
“My name is Zean-la and from the looks of things, you have had enough.”

Deeja:
“Enough? Ha! I hope you do not expect me to call it quits when I know Saracus-tran hits much harder.” Deeja regroups himself while taking a deep breath. This insult angered Zean-la.

Zean-la:
“Liar! He is only on level thirty-one. Only his daughter and myself train on level thirty- seven!”

Deeja:
“Trust me, that man hits a lot harder than you woman!”

Zean-la:
“Why you ungrateful, good for nothing-”
Deeja:
“So, you did pull that punch!” Says the now upset Deeja as he prepares to fire the strongest energy blast his anger could fuel an adds, “Maybe you are holding back but a true warrior holds back nothing!” Deeja says while firing…“VIIIZZZZ!”

Nar:
Zean-la easily dodges his attack and uses her super speed to get close, and was upon her opponent for a second time. She quickly smashes her right foot to the left side of his face knocking him into the nearby wall. Deeja’s back bounced off the wall landing on his stomach face first on the floor. He then slowly pushed himself up from the floor to his feet. With that kick to the head and the taste of blood in his mouth, put a big smile on his face.

Deeja:
“Now girly, hold back nothing!” Deeja uses a rapid fire of energy blasts just knowing one of them will hit her. (sounds of exploding energy blasts) But to no avail, not any of them did. As they came at her, she held up two fingers to her head and simply disappears. With this added surprise Deeja’s rapid fire ceased. It was because he could no longer feel her presence anywhere and when his rapid-fire blast struck the inner wall, “Impossible, no one can drop their power level that low unless they were dead or not on the planets’ surface.” Deeja whispers. An just then he feels her faint presence and thinks to himself, (“No, she’s here I can feel it.”)

Zean-la:
“Nothing impossible.” Zean-la reappears for a brief moment then turn into a blur.

Nar:
Abruptly out of nowhere, Deeja began to feel pain he has never felt all over his entire body. Deeja didn’t know what to reach for first, his kidneys or his liver. The physical onslaught lasted about thirty-two seconds. Soon after Zean-la’s body stops moving and stood five feet away from him, looking at him. There was no part on Deeja’s body that didn’t feel pain. All he could do was fall flat on his back.

Deeja:
“I…have…lost a…all respect…for you…woman!”

Zean-la:
“Why, just because I beat you?”

Unable to move his body Deeja turns his head towards Zean-la and watches as she walks over to him…

Deeja:
“No, because…you still…held back.”

Zean-la:
“Are all saiyans as crazy as you?” Zean-la holds out her hand offering to help him up.

Deeja:
“Yes, we…are. Now leave me! I…do not…need your assistance…girl!” Deeja rudely turns his head away from her.

Zean-la:
“My name is-Awe forget it!” Zean-la storms angrily out of level twenty-two as Deeja slowly loses consciousness.

AV:
[“AS DEEJA FALLS UNCONSCIOUS, WHAT WILL HE WAKE UP TOO? THE ONLY WAY TO FIND OUT IS TO BE HERE FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

CH: 3 ENTER TAYKEN

AV:
[“DEEJA SLEPT FOR FOUR DAYS AND WAS AWAKENED BY A LOUD…”]
“BONG, BONG, BONG!”

Nar:
As Deeja’s eyes opened he found himself lying in his resting quarters without any clothes on and his body healed. He got up from his bed and looked out his window an from the look of Naidacon’s two suns the time was just about noon.

Deeja:
“What was that noise? An how did I get here?”

Nar:
While looking over is room he found that everything was quite, too quite. Deeja soon dressed himself and headed for his balcony doors. Before he reached the door handle he paused for he knew there was more to the silence that meets the eye and deep down he wanted find out what. So Deeja went on an reached for the knobs and opened the doors, only to be greeted by a loud roar…

C.O.P:
“YEEAAHH!” A large crowd of people forty-feet below were screaming and cheering at the top of their voices. He looked down at them and thought to himself.

Deeja:
(“I do not know what is going on. As long as I have been here, I have never seen anything like this. It looks as if every being on the planet is down there.”) As he looked at the crowd of creatures that seemed to go on for at least two miles, he casts his eyes in the direction of Dannar’s balcony twenty-five feet away from his. Dannar was standing on it, waving for him to come over. Deeja grabbed his boots and slipped them on and wonders inside his mind while rushing out his door running to his mentor’s room. (“Maybe this planet is under an attack of some kind?”) When he reached Dannar’s room he hesitates for a moment knowing that he has never entered his master’s place of sanctum, but from inside the room.

Dannar:
“Do not just stand there second guessing, come on in and find out what is truly turning out to be!” Dannar yells from his balcony.

Deeja entered and walked out an over to his teacher.

Deeja:
“What is this master Dannar?”
Dannar:
“This is The Day of Tayken, Deeja. A day where two warriors do battle for the life of another.” Dannar grows a big smile.

Deeja:
“I do not understand master. Who is fighting, and whose life hangs in the balance?”

Dannar:
“Look there in the distance.” Dannar points his finger using it as a guide towards the open field.

Deeja:
“I do not see anything but two dots. Who are they?”
Dannar:
“If you cannot see with your eyes then feel deep within yourself, as I taught you.” With those words from his master, Deeja concentrates and realizes who they are…

Deeja:
“Zean-la and the other is Sasha-tran, Saracus-tran’s daughter. Whose life do they fight for master?”

Dannar:
“Why yours, my dear boy.” Deeja stands there dazed and confused his teacher explains more, “You must understand the laws in this world and by law your life belonged to Saracus-tran. He was the one who defeated you in battle and with his choice; at the right age you were chosen to wed his daughter. If you did not agree to these terms he would take your life. That day is today but that law can be canceled. Only if someone freely offered their life for yours and to the death if need be in a Tayken match.”

Deeja:
“Death? Marriage? No one has told me of these laws Dannar!”

Dannar:
“When your twentieth year is up, then you can refer to me as Dannar. But until then, it is master first, understand?” Deeja says nothing while Dannar continues, “Your ships are still intact and you can run away without anyone knowing if you wish. But the laws and rules will be followed, understand?”

Deeja:
“Yes master, I understand and I will not run. Never have, never will.” Deeja held his head high an answering.

Dannar:
“Good-very good. Zean-la and Sasha-tran will fight until there is only one victor. I have placed an invisible barrier around the two of them so that no harm will come to this planet or its people. No one can enter nor leave until the battle is over.”

Deeja:
“When does the battle begin master?”

Dannar held his left arm straight up and spreads his fingers high towards the sky. A small blue oval shape orb shot from the center of his palm. When it reached a hundred feet it exploded in all the colors of the rainbow. It spreads over his home and was seen from miles around.

Dannar:
“The battle begins…now.”

And soon after Deeja flew down into the crowd where his saiyan brethren were standing…

Parrda:
“What do you make of this Deeja?”

Deeja:
“It is a trial Pardda and there can be only one victor. You will know more soon after it is over.”

Nar:
The two saiyans stopped talking and looked more with their senses than with their eyes to the field. While in the center of a large field the two women stood face to face, staring at one another. And soon as the signal to begin was seen by them the battle began with equal power. Both of the female gladiators’ bodies absorbed punches and kicks that could shatter a five thousand-foot mountain into small pebbles. An was taking each other’s energy blast that could destroy entire worlds.

For nine days all anyone could do was watch in awe. No one ate or slept; they just stood there looking and watching as the two female warriors beat each other senseless.

On the tenth day inside the mile wide arena, the two nearly exhausted fighters pause momentarily to talk amongst them selves.

Sasha-tran:
“Huff! Answer me this Zean-la. How…much do you…Puff!…care for…this saiyan?” The young woman asks her opponent as she tries to catch her breath.

Zean-la:
“Puff!…To put it simply Sasha…huff! I care…more than you!”

Nar:
With Zean-la’s words finished set off a chain reaction within Sasha-tran’s body. A protective nigh invulnerable coat of armor oozed from a small patch of metal on her back, then hardening. Her entire body was covered from head to toe in a glimmering suit of blue-green armor.

Sasha-tran:
“Now Zean-la. All bets are off!”

Zean-la:
“That suits me…just fine.” Zean-la says gladly wiping some blood from her lips.

Zean-la’s eyes began to burn a hot orange. As she tightens her fists the very ground around her begins to shake violently. Soon after a shock wave was felt back at the large crowd through her father’s invisible barrier.

Hy:
“Deeja, do you feel that?”

Deeja:
“Yes my friend. Even though we feel the ground quake beneath our feet does not even compare to Zean-la or Sasha-tran’s true power.”

Hy:
“Exactly what I was referring to boss; they make lord Freiza’s power look like child’s play.”

Dannar floats down besides Deeja and within half of a second the two women bodies collide head on. A blinding white light flashed so bright that everyone who watched was momentarily blinded. Well, everyone except Dannar and he also knew what was coming next. He quickly straightens out his arm, opening then closing his right hand into a fist while a light blue aura surrounded it. The protective barrier strength was multiplied by a hundred and now was visible to the naked eye. Then without warning the mother of all shock waves struck against the barrier and it shook the lands for miles around in all directions.

After the impact, the two women’s power-levels quickly starts to drop. Zean-la was lying on her back not moving, forty feet away from Sasha-tran lying on her stomach. Her armor was slowly softening and moving its way back to where it started on her back.

Now, back to the crowd rubbing his eyes.

Deeja:
“Master Dannar, I cannot see. Who has won the battle?”

Dannar:
“I do not know at this time Deeja but as we speak Zean-la struggles to her feet and even though a lone woman stands does not mean she is the victor.”

Deeja:
“What is this master, another riddle of laws?”

Dannar:
“No riddles Deeja, just be patient and wait for the out come to be.”

Back inside the arena, Zean-la staggers towards her fallen opponent, whose eyes were open and her breathing heavy, and was unable to move. Zean-la reached Sasha-tran’s body and stood over her.

Zean-la:
“Would you…trade your life…for his?”

Sasha-tran says nothing and with her not responding, Zean-la reaches down and grabs her by ragged blouse with her left hand. She then pulls the top half of Sasha-trans’ limp body off the ground and eases her close to her face. As Zean-la slowly powers up her right hand an prepares to blast Sasha-tran in her face, killing her instantly, she asks again.

Zean-la:
“Now, I ask you once more and for the last time. Will you trade your life for his?”

Sasha-tran:
“No.” Sasha-tran answers in a low voice.

Zean-la powers down her right hand and releases Sasha-tran with her left dropping her to the ground.

Zean-la:
“Then…this battle…is over.”

Dannar releases his barrier.

Dannar:
“Zean-la is the victor!”

As soon as the crowd heard the news they all cheered in one voice…

C.O.P:
“YEEEAAAHHH!!!”

Zean-la’s acute ears heard they’re loud roars and turned to see them. She took two steps and fell face first from exhaustion and her life force starts to plummets downward. As Deeja feels her power quickly fading he blindly pushed his way through the crowd and powers up to his maximum level as soon as he was clear an flew in Zean-la’s direction as fast as he could fly. For the very first time in his life, his heart and mind open simultaneously.

AV:
[“WILL DEEJA BE ABLE TOO MAKE IT TO ZEAN-LA IN TIME? I DON’T KNOW Z-FANS. YOU’LL JUST HAVE TO CATCH THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

CH: 4 A NEW DAY BEGINS

AV:
[“AS DEEJA’S VISION BEGAN TO CLEAR HE SAW THAT ZEAN-LA WAS LYING NEARLY LIFELESS. BUT HE WAS HOPING, ACCUALLY PRAYING THAT SHE WAS NOT IN DEATH’S ARMS.”]

When Deeja arrived to Zean-la’s body he quickly but carefully picked her up and flew her towards her father.

Zean-la:
“I did not…know you cared…saiyan.” Zean-la says speaking with a weakened voice.

Deeja:
“Save your breath Zean-la. Master Dannar will heal your wounds.”

Zean-la:
“That is…uncertain…Deeja…but it…matters not. Your debt with…Saracus-tran is paid…in fu-. Wait, that is…strange, I thought…I heard…you call me by…name.”

Deeja:
“Zean-la, you must be silent. We are almost there.”

Zean-la:
“Deeja, you must…know this. I care for m…more than life it-”

Zean-la falls unconscious as moments later Deeja arrives back to the palace like home of Dannar.

Deeja:
“Master, please tell me that she will not die.”

Dannar:
“You know as well as I that everything living must die Deeja. Besides, what do you care proud saiyan warrior?”

Deeja:
“We saiyans may not be big on emotions but we are still made out of flesh and blood.”

Dannar:
“So what you are saying is that you do care for her?”

Deeja:
“Yes master, like no other. No one has ever freely given their life…for mine.” Deeja held his head down saying no more.

Calmly Dannar placed one of his hands on Zean-la’s forehead and the other on the top of Deeja’s and says with a smile.

Dannar:
“Good-very good and her day dying is not today.” Deeja raised his head high while Dannar’s hand on his daughter began to glow light green and adds, “Deeja, there are going to be many difficult choices you will have to make in the near future and your loyalty will be tested. No matter what they will be, you and my daughter have my blessing.”

Deeja:
(“Could he have read my mind and found out what my true plan was, for the completion of my training under his teachings. No, he could not have or I would probably be dead right now. Nor would he have given me shelter in his own home, so close to his only daughter.”) Deeja thinks pondering his masters’ words.

The very next day Zean-la asked Deeja to wed her and he did not decline her offer. So the very next spring they were married. Creatures from all over the planet were in attendance. It was a most beautiful sight any one of them had ever seen. The celebration lasted a full day and night. That was a long time, for Naidacon’s days lasted thirty-seven hours.

Seven months later, the couple bore a healthy baby boy. He had his mothers tanned skin but it was a little bit lighter. He had his father’s features including his hairy monkey-like tail, but the hair on his head and tail was snow white. They named him Deannar after his father and grandfather.

One more year later has now passed; Zean-la has now bore a second child, a girl. They named her Nala. She was much like her older brother light tan skin and white hair on her head and tail. At this time Deeja was on level twenty-five inside of Mount Misery and the rest of his crew was on level twenty-two.

Time seemed to pass quickly, for Deannar and his sister; because at this time years later; he was six and she was five. They were incredibly strong for their age and grew faster and larger than the other children in their age group. When Dannar saw this, he decided that the two of them should begin their training the next following year.

The year came and he led them both inside level one of Mount Misery. It wasn’t easy for the youngsters to train under ten times normal gravity. They first had to learn how to breathe before they could properly train. But lucky for them, their grandfather was there to guide them while their father and mother climbed steady up the mountain levels.

And now seven more years have passed, Deannar was fourteen years of age and has now reached level eighteen. His sister who just turned thirteen was not far behind on level seventeen. No one ever suspected that these half-saiyan children would be so powerful. Even Dannar was surprised, because within seven years, Deannar has passed seventeen levels and Nala sixteen. At this time the control of Deannar’s powers was flawless. And with it came some unwanted visitors. One day five older trainees from level twenty-four came down to his level to spar with him. When they entered Deannar felt their presence behind him while he trained, but did not stop.

Deannar:
“Hi guys, can I help you with anything?”

Franok:
“Sure can squirt. You can start by turning around an fight me.”

Deannar stopped practicing and stands perfectly still while he was slowly being surrounded…

Deannar:
“Sorry Franok, but my grandfather told me to never fight for nothing.”

Franok:
“Well he’s not here Deannar and what he doesn’t know won’t hurt him.” But little did any of them know that Dannar was watching his grandson with his first test. And Dannar’s question to himself was would his grandson pass? Pass against being out numbered and his main opponents was five years older, had more body mass and was a foot taller than him, “So what’s it going to be baby Deannie-weenie, you’re gonna fight me, or-” Suddenly Franok quickly grabs Deannar from behind in a tightly held chokehold as he continued talking, “Or do I have to twist your head off to get the answers I want out of you?”

Deannar:
“I wi…will not…fight…you.”

Franok:
“Not the answer I was looking for little Deannar. Oh well, since you’re not going to fight me. Maybe we should all go down one level and have a little chat with his little sister. What do you say guys?”

Just then, Deannar seemed to slip out of this reality and started to steer from his grandfathers’ teachings. A few years ago Dannar taught his grandson about restraint. Deannar built up a wall to contain his sometimes-reckless emotions, which was inherited from his father Deeja. And just the thought of these five higher level fighters doing harm to his little sister made those walls of containment come tumbling down. Deannar slowly braced both of his feet flat on the floor and Franok notices, then tightens his grip.

Franok:
“Well, what do we have here? I guess my comment about his little sister, made Deannar mad.”

All of a sudden Deannar’s eye pupils began to flash green then back to light brown as his white hair began to stand on end and flash a yellowish-gold color.

Deannar:
“No, I am not going to let you hurt-” suddenly a loud gold flash filled the room followed by a large power surge as Deannar finishes, “-my sister, YUURRAAH!

The power serge knocked all of the would be attackers against the inside mountain walls. But quickly they all made it to their feet and stared at Deannar in utter shock. He didn’t know what has happened to him nor does he care. But he does know that he felt stronger than he ever has and was not going to let any harm come to Nala.

Deannar:
“If you want to get to my sister-” The now golden hair Deannar wraps his furry yellow tail around his waist while continue saying, “-you will have to get by me first.”

AV:
[“WHAT THE, DEANNAR’S A SUPER SAIYAN? O-BOY D.B.Z. FANS, IF YOU THINK THIS IS SHOCKING, THEN STICK AROUND FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE
THE BIRTH OF A SUPER SAIYAN

CH: 5
THE BIRTH OF SUPER SAIYAN

AV: [“CAN ANY OF YOU Z FANS BELIEVE IT? DEANNAR’S A SUPER SAIYAN. CAN DEANNAR CONTROL THIS AWSOME POWER? JUST KEEP READING AND FIND OUT.”]

Deannar:
“Like I said Franok if you want to get to my sister, you will have to go through me first.”

Franok:
“Kid, looks like that’s just what I gonna do.” Franok charges Deannar hard and fast but couldn’t lay a hand or foot on him. Deannar was moving at speeds that even frighten himself, but he didn’t let Franok or his crew in on that little secret. To Deannar, Franok's movements were slow and sluggish. With little effort he avoided Franok’s attack, “Hold still you little half-breed. So I can knock you into next week!”

And in that moment Deannar caught Franok’s fist in his palm and slowly began squeezing it.

Deannar:
“Is this slow enough for you Franok?”

Franok tried and tried, but couldn’t pull his hand free from Deannar’s grip. He then tried kicking himself free but that too didn’t work. Deannar simply blocked his kicks with ease. When the pain became too much for Franok to bear.

Franok:
“UGG! D…don’t just stand there you minks! Get this…freak…off of me!” On Franok's orders his four flunkies all attacked in one motion. But their skill was a lot like Franok’s. They we’re much too slow to make contact. The only thing they hit was air. An while they all swung and kicked including Franok, Deannar continued squeezing his fist.

Deannar could judge each of their attacks and knew exactly where they were going to land before they’re movements was complete. Deannar then had an idea. He was going to teach these guys a lesson and that was to never threaten his family again. So when he moved to avoid his attackers blow and kicks, those kicks and punches was not going to be wasted on air anymore. Deannar angled himself just right, so when he ducked a roundhouse kick from behind. It caught the one in front of him square in the face, knocking him against the nearby wall. His attackers were now mistakenly hitting each other.

Wanaka:
“Sorry Kulp, it was Deannar’s fault.”

Kulp:
“Wanaka, you stupid girl, watch where you are kicking!” Kulp picked himself off of the floor holding his jaw with his right hand.

Deannar moved Franok in a position that made him get punched in his face…

Franok:
“Ouch! Velcree that hurt!”
Velcree:
“It’s Deannar, Franok. He’s playing with us.”

Deannar:
“Finally, so one of you has caught on-”The presence of Dannar cut Deannar short of his bragging rights as he thinks to himself, (“Grandfather is near and I can feel him through the walls. I could have never done that before this change. All right I better get over that fact quickly, because if he catches me fighting, he is going to skin me alive. I must end this in a hurry before he arrives.”)

The young super saiyan smashes his left elbow into Wanaka’s nose. Then in a split second he kicks the wind out his right and left attackers. While Kulp, an orange skinned creature stands behind Franok cautiously, Deannar releases his fist.

Deannar:
“Get out of here Franok and take your garbage with you.”

Franok:
“This is far from over Deannar!” Franok rubbed his hand, followed by his face.

Without notice, a familiar voice echoes all throughout level eighteen…

Dannar:
“Well for your sake Franok, son of Juslar…it better be.” Then from out of nowhere, Dannar appears…

Franok:
“Master Dannar I-” Franok tries to talk himself out of it, but is soon cut off.

Dannar:
“Do not speak Franok nor of what has transpired here, understand? Or everyone on Naidacon will know that a fourteen year old defeated five of level twenty-four’s best fighters. We would not want that, eh Franok, Velcree, Kulp, Wanaka, and Ghusta?” As Dannar called out their names each one of them held their heads down. When he finished, Franok lifted his head…

Franok:
“You’re right master; a little something like this will not be spoken of in or out of Mount Misery.”

Dannar:
“Good-very good, now be on your way. It is time for dinning, you to Deannar.”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.” Deannar then releases the power of a super saiyan, powering back down to normal and then realizing that the luminous lights of completion we’re flashing inside his training chamber, “Gr…grandfather?”

Dannar:
“Ha, ha. So you finally noticed the lights of completion flashing.” Dannar says laughing softly.

Deannar:
“But grandfather, was I really that strong?”

Dannar:
“Hummm, no Deannar, stronger. But do not concern yourself about this right now. Now we dine.”

Later that night after dinner in Deannar’s room he found himself restless. He kept wondering what had happen to him earlier that day…

Deannar:
(“The change didn’t hurt me in any way. It only made me better, stronger and faster. My senses became widen, reflexes sharpened and my stamina increased tenfold.”) An at that very moment he wanted to feel it again. The only way he could change freely was inside Mount Misery where no one else could go or sense his power; on level fifty. That very same night he went there and when Deannar reached his destination. He didn’t rush inside the level because he knew the sheer extreme weight would have crushed him, (“Maybe if I changed, just maybe I’ll be strong enough to survive this level.”)

So without a second thought Deannar dug inside his thoughts for that feeling of power. Moments passed as he concentrated and searched but he couldn’t transform…

Deannar:
(“Where are you? I know that you are here. Why will it not wor- wait, at the time that changed I was angry.”) Just then he felt a familiar spark on why he was angry ran through his mind, then he continued thinking, (“No, I was furious!”) And in that moment he transformed into a super saiyan using his anger and love for his sister to fuel his transformation. (“There, I have you now and believe me I will not let you go.”) Deannar says silently to himself with a smile on his face and stepped inside level fifty.

When both of his feet were flat on the chamber floor, five hundred times normal gravity came crashing down around him all at once. Deannar fell on his hands and knees while straining to get to his feet. He could only intake short breaths of air but his lungs screamed for more. Deannar tried strenuously for fifteen minutes to standup straight and once he finally did, it took all of his strength he could muster just too keep from passing out. He stood there inside the doorway for twenty-five more minutes and couldn’t take the ever-growing pressure anymore. So he backed out of the room. Soon as Deannar was completely out of level fifty he fell to his knees and had no choice in powering down. While he sat there sweat poured from his body as he tried catching his breath. But then his breathing suddenly cuts off, for he knew he was not alone…

Dannar:
“So young Deannar, son of Deeja. How was your outing?”

Deannar:
“Grandfather! How did you know I was here?”

Dannar:
“When sneaking out, you must not just be silent as the wind but cover your tracks as well.”

The scene quickly flashes to Deannar’s room showing the wind was blowing his window curtains to and fro.

Back inside Mount Misery…

Dannar:
“Now, are you hurt?”

Deannar:
“Only my pride grandfather, for I could only be inside for a short time.”

Dannar:
“O-really, then tell me Deannar. Is this level to much for you in your changed state?”

Deannar held his head up so his eyes meet his grandfathers’.

Deannar:
“I think I know you well enough to know that you already have the answers.” Dannar just stood there looking back at him and didn’t make a comment. Then Deannar lowers his head down and answers his grandfather’s first question, “Yes grandfather, I think it is too much for me and right now my wit is useless as well.”

Dannar:
“And I think it is not. You did stand to your feet, did you not?”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”

Dannar:
“Then tell this old man what your most difficult thing too do when you first entered.”

Deannar:
“To stand.”
Dannar:
“Yes and now you’re second?” Deannar thought to himself for moment and then answered, “My breathing!”

Dannar:
“Good-very good and without the proper air supplied to the body it will not function correctly. So, do not be in any rush nor do not force what is so eager to come out. On your next visit-” Dannar turns around smiling an walks down the dark hallway and continues, “-first learn how to crawl before walking, you do remember my teaching do you not?”

Dannar disappeared into the darkness while the youngster thought long and hard on what his grandfather told him…

Deannar:
(“Crawl before walking?”)

Many days pass, Deannar secretly went to the mountain in the early mornings. And with each day pass he would inch his way further and further inside of level fifty fully transformed. Finally one day he made it to center and on that day he sat there for thirty-eight minutes. On his second trip sitting, one hour.

Within twelve days Deannar mastered the art of breathing in five hundred times normal gravity. His sitting time was now twenty-six hours. He could’ve stayed longer that day but Deannar knew his parents or sister would come looking for him. So he left the chamber an crept by the other levels and made it back down to the level he suppose to be training on. An just before he could throw one punch on level nineteen, a young piercing female voice yells standing outside of his level.

Nala:
“Deannar, there you are! I have been looking all over for you.”

When Deannar turns around he notices…

Deannar:
“Oh, have you Nala? Why did you not come here first?”

Nala:
“I did silly, matter of fact; this is my fourth trip here in thirteen hours. Care to explain?”

Deannar:
“No Nala, I would not.”

Nala:
“Deannar, you might as well tell me or shall I tell you where you have been myself?”

Deannar:
(“What, Nala knows where I have been?”) Deannar says to himself with a surprised look.

Nala:
“I can tell by the look on your face that you know I know. So how long have you been doing this?”

Deannar:
“I…I-”

AV:
[“UH, OH DEANNAR, YOUR LITTLE SISTER KNOWS SOMETHING ABOUT YOU. WILL DEANNAR CONFESS HIS SECERT OR WILL HE TRY TO HIDE THE TRUTH EVEN FURTHER? THE ONLY WAY TO FIND OUT IS TOO READ THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE TRUE LIES

CH: 6 TRUE LIES

AV:
[“WHEN WE LEFT DEANNAR, HIS LITTLE SISTER KNEW SOMETHING. IS HIS SECERT OUT? JUST STICK AROUND AND FIND OUT.”]

Nala:
“So Deannar, you still refuse to tell me, huh? It is nothing to be ashamed of. No one cares if you and Soleena are seeing each other.”

Deannar:
“What, Soleena and I…together? But Nala, I do not even like her.”

Nala:
“You can drop the act brother dear. She has told me many times on how she liked you. An I do not believe you have been sneaking out of your room late at night for nearly two weeks for nothing.”

Deannar:
“But, I-” Deannar stops and catches himself, then knows, (“Nala thinks I have been wasting my time with Soleena and really do not know my secret. Hump, that is good, she now follows a false trail and that should keep her mind busy for some time.”) -“Well, what can I say Nala. I can never seem to hide anything from you, now could I?”

Nala:
“And you better believe it.” Nala says cheerfully and flies back down to her place of practice.

Deannar:
“That was to close.” Deannar says as he pulls his left arm back to begin his training with a punch. When he released his arm forward the luminous lights of completion filled the room, “What? I cannot be finished this level this soon. I have at least forty-two days of training on this level. Besides, I am not even transformed.” Deannar said quickly then turns and walked out of his level and waited for the lights to go off. An when they did, he stepped back inside to make sure that the light didn’t come back on but they did.

Deannar:
(“The rooms’ sensor was correct.”) He says to himself wondering standing there, (“This is amazing. I did not even throw one punch on level fifty.”)

But then he thought back on what his grandfather told him, [“Without the proper air supplied to the body, it will not function correctly. And you must learn how to crawl before walking.”]

Deannar:
“I thought it was just another one of his riddles. But it was not, he was telling me to strengthen my insides first then my outer body will follow. Thank you grandfather, you are truly the wisest man I know.” Deannar took one giant step back and was out of level nineteen. He then flew up to level twenty and saw that no one was inside. So he slowly entered and his body didn’t feel a difference between level nineteen or twenty. A big smile ran across his face, then he threw a quick kick and then the lights came on in here as well, “Simply, incredible. I did not even put any force into that kick.” Deannar says as he quickly turned an rush to the next level.

Six people were in there training so when he went inside he quickly threw two straight jabs with his right arm and the light came on. Everyone paused their training and looked around an wondered who has graduated to the next level. But before anyone could notice exactly who it was, Deannar had already left out and was on his way to the next level. As the light went off, one out of six caught a glimpse of him running out, then asked the creature closest to it…

Xia:
“Hay Ragmu, did you know who that was?”

Ragmu:
“Who Xia?”

Xia:
“So you didn’t see’em?”

Ragmu:
“No, but for a split second I thought I felt Deannar’s presence.”

Xia:
“Deannar? You mean Deeja’s kid?”

Ragmu:
“Yeah.”

Nar:
The two looked at each other a moment and says at the same time…

Xia/Ragmu:
“Nahhh!”

Then without any further notion of the event, they continued they’re training while Deannar continued his by testing each level as he went higher and higher. When he arrived on level thirty-five Deannar knew he had to make this one quick because this is where his father now trained. Deannar knew the moment he stepped in his father would pick up his presence. But when he peeked inside, he found himself lucky. His father was sparing with Jurlus, Franok’s father and there were a number of people inside. When the time came Deannar made his move by stepping in and in doing so he felt a slight pressure on his chest. So he turned his back quickly to everyone and powered up, so that a light purple aura surrounded him. In Deeja’s process of sparing he catches his sons’ presence inside the room. An in disbelief his concentration brakes and when his guard is momentarily dropped…“BASH!”

Deeja was smashed in his face with one of Jurlus’s heavy punches. Jurlus’ blow knocked Deeja against the mountains far wall and soon after the levels’ sensors came on, then off…

Deeja:
“What? Someone has gone to the next level?” Deeja rubs the left side of his lower jaw as Jurlus flew over to him.

Jurlus:
“You are a poor excuse for a sparring partner Deeja. If you keep this up, your son will no longer be riding your heels but wearing your boots.”

Deeja:
“You can save that feeble excuse for a boast Jurlus and let us start this battle anew.”

Jurlus:
“So you like the taste of defeat Deeja? Then I have an endless supply of samples for your taste buds.” Jurlus stands ready and adds one more insult, “I hope you’re hungry.”

Deeja stood to his feet and powers-up.

Deeja
“Starved!” Deeja then charges Jurlus and when they connect, a furry of fists and legs rained down on each man. While they fought Deeja couldn’t shake the thought, (“My son, here? Impossible!”)

But little did Deeja know that he was right and wrong. Deannar was there, but not anymore. He now heads to level thirty-six and when he reaches up an over the balcony Deannar could not help but wonder…

Deannar:
(“Did father sense my presence? No, he could not have or he would be out looking for me right now.”)

Deannar peeped over the balcony’s edge to see if his father was coming and when he saw that he didn’t he breathe out a sigh of relief. Now that his father didn’t follow, Deannar passed level thirty-six and does the same with three more levels. But with each level he had to use more and more force. When he reached level forty a combination of his strongest punches and kicks didn’t make the light of completion come on.

On this level Deannar knew he would actually have too train to make it passed it. So after a bath, good meal, and a full days rest. He took on level forty for the day and for night Deannar would train on level fifty with the physical change of a super saiyan.

For four years Deannar trained and in that time has progressed nicely. He was now practicing secretly on level fifty-three as his normal self, meanwhile in his super saiyan form on level sixty-eight. All was going smoothly until one early morning Nala awoke out of her sleep and thought to herself…

Nala:
(“While I am up I could ask Deannar when he and Soleena are going to wed? Even though he is playing a good role that they are not talking.”) As soon as she stood straight up and stretched, her senses told her that, (“He is not in his room, matter of fact he is not anywhere. Wait, this could only mean that he is inside Mount Misery, a place where no one’s presence can be detected.”) Nala then raised up her left eyebrow while her mouth grew a sly grin, (“Well Deannar, you romantic fool. You and Soleena are having a night to yourselves. Aw…that is so swe-

Nala’s thoughts were cut short by her still wandering senses, (“Wait a minute, I can feel Soleena. She is in her room across the way. But if she is there, then why is my brother inside Mount Misery this early? The time for his training does not start for two hours more.”) Nala folds her arms, “Hump!”-(“Well, there is only one way to find out.”)

Nala dressed herself quickly without making a sound. Then flew to the mountains’ entrance and went inside. Soon as she entered Nala quickly flew to level twenty-eight too where Deannar told her, he was on last. When she looked inside no one was there she then began to wonder to herself some…

Nala:
(“Where is he then?”) She then looks all around, then lastly over her head. An when she did her eyes caught a faint yellow light flashing form far, far above. Her curiosity led her quickly to the ever-growing lights. When she arrived at the yellow lights Nala noticed, “Deannar, is that you?”

But Deannar couldn’t hear her from the loud noise inside of his chamber, for he was dodging his own energy blast. Deannar had fired on the special level inner walls that reflected energy fire. An now twenty of his most deadly energy blasts were coming back at him at frightening speeds in all directions…

Nala:
(“He cannot hear me. His energy blasts must be drowning out my words. Wow, look at him, he is moving so fast. This cannot be happening. Why is his hair yellow and eyes green? And this level he is on I know I flew pretty far up.”) Nala looked to the top of the rooms’ entrance and saw… “Level sixty-eight! No way is he practicing in six hundred and eighty times’ normal gravity. This has to be so kind of trick. Maybe if I stepped inside I can get some answers.” Just as Nala was about to enter, she stops because she now feels her… “Grandfather, you are back!”

Dannar:
“Yes Nala, it is I and it would not be wise to enter.” Dannar says floating down by her side.

Nala:
“Why not, just because I am a girl?”

Dannar:
“No Nala, because if you do, you would be killed.”

Nala:
“So all of this is really happening an Deannar has somehow changed into something else that can take that kind of pressure?”

Dannar:
“In a way, yes. He has changed and he must be in deep concentration not to feel our presence.”

Nala:
“You mean to tell me he can feel us while he is inside the practicing chamber?”

Dannar:
“Yes Nala, in this state he can do many things other saiyans can only dream of doing.”

Nala:
“How long has he been like this grandfather?”

Dannar:
“Hum, maybe you should ask him yourself.” Dannar says as he slowly raises his power level.

From the depths of Deannar’s very being he feels his grandfather and sister while still dodging his energy blasts…

Deannar:
(“Grandfather and Nala, here? He must be back from his two month venture.”)

But Deannar couldn’t falter for a split second or he would be seriously injured, if he was hit.

Deannar:
“Then this practice…is over.”He then a-lines himself upside down in mid air in the center of the hailing death coming his way. In a blinding light he released an energy wave that destroyed all of the energy blasts, which came his way. Soon after, the chamber fell silent, “So grandfather, we have another who knows our little secret? How was your trip?” Deannar says as he turns and lowers himself to the entrance.

Dannar pauses and then answers…

Dannar:
“O-yes, my trip. It was an interesting one but enough about me; your little sister now knows our secret but not as much as she should. Would you mind doing the honors and tell her how long you has been this way?”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”-(“He is avoiding my first question and is hiding something.”) Deannar says then wonders to himself but didn’t let on that he knew and kept talking, “It will be a great heaviness lifted from my shoulders to tell someone of this gift I have been rewarded and-” Deannar pauses as he now feels a strange new presence entering Naidacon’s highest atmosphere.

Dannar:
“Deannar, what is the matter?” asked his grandfather.

Deannar turns then points…

Deannar:
“There, in that direction. I feel something new almost upon the planets’ surface. From this distance and inside the practice chamber, I could only guess what it is, but guessing is something I prefer not to do.”

Dannar:
“Humm, nor do I, but do not sense anything new on its way to Naidacons’ surface. But that is the way your senses do pull your thoughts my son?” Dannar asks while wondering, (“That is in the direction of our two rising suns an I sense deeply that Deannar suspects I am not telling him tell whole truth in my words about my trip. My, my he is getting better at his ever sharpening senses.”)

Deannar:
“Maybe it is just me grandfather. It could be nothing.”

Dannar:
“Maybe, maybe not, but we shall investigate, take my hand.”

Deannar steps out of level sixty-eight and powers down to his normal self and then takes his grandfather’s hand.

Nala:
“Wow!” Nala says as she watches her brother change back to his old self.

Dannar:
“Now focus your mind on what you are sensing in that area.”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”

Deannar does as Dannar requested…

Dannar:
“Are you prepared my son?”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”

Dannar then puts his two fingers together and places them in the center of his head. The two of them vanish. Within a blink of an eye, they both arrive close to where this new presence now lies behind a large hill.

Back at Mount Misery standing on the outside of level sixty-eight…

Nala:
“O-no, you guys are not going to leave me out of this.” Nala says as she leaps into the air over the balcony and flies down to the mountain entrance and quickly exits. Soon as Nala was outside she placed two of her fingers on her fore head. Then waits for a second to get a fix on their location, then, “There, I got you two!” she says as she to disappears and second later arrives next to them.

Dannar:
“Nala, I did not ask you to come.” Dannar spoke quietly without turning to see his granddaughter.

Nala:
“Yes I know grandfather, nor did you tell me to stay.”

Dannar looked at his granddaughter and smiled…

Dannar:
“Clever girl, I did not. But you will stay here behind this hill while Deannar and I go over its’ peek, understand?”

Nala:
“Yes grandfather.”

Dannar:
“Good-very good.” Dannar and his grandson then walked up the hill and observed down below. Only to see a smoking crater and at the center was a, “Saiyan sphere ship!”

Deannar:
“So this is what they look like. My father explained to me about his ship but never showed me what it looked like.”

Dannar:
“Yes my son and it is empty but this one…is not, look!”

A loud hissing sound came from the ship as its door slowly slid opened…

AV:
[“WHO COULD THIS NEW PRESENCE BE? COULD IT BE FRIEND OR FOE? YOU’LL SEE NEXT TIME ON DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE
HIDDEN ENEMY

CH: 7
HIDDEN ENEMY
AV:
[“A LONE FIGURE APPEARED STANDING ON THE OUTSIDE OF THE SAIYAN SHIP…”]

Dannar saw and thought to himself while staying low behind the hilltop…

Dannar:
(“It is male saiyan and he has recently been in some sort of battle. His body is scared and he has somehow lost his tail. But there is no doubt he is a pureblooded saiyan and Deannar sensed this long before I did. You have improved much sooner than I had anticipated my son.”) Dannar then notices his face a bit clearer as the smoke rises and realizes, (“This saiyan looks nearly like Deeja…hum, I wonder.”) Dannar ponders as he looks over to his grandson but is interrupted by the stranger’s voice…

Goku:
“I know you are out there, I can feel you!”

Deannar:
“He can feel us grandfather?”

Dannar placed his hand on his chin and wonders some more…

Dannar:
(“This is no ordinary saiyan. He can actually feel our presence without using technology-”

Dannar’s train of thought brakes as the unknown saiyan speaks once more looking in all directions…

Goku:
“I don’t mean you any harm, you can come out now!”

Dannar:
“Go ahead Deannar, go and meet our new visitor.” Dannar says smiling.

Deannar then wraps his tail around his waist, holding his head up proudly.

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”

And as his body rose in the air, Dannar grandfather grabs his ankle…

Dannar:
“Do not take flight, walk. We must not give advantage to anyone who could be a threat.”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”

Deannar says descending to the ground and walks up and over the hill very quietly. While the new but older saiyan continued to look around Deannar came closer and closer. He was now close enough to see that this saiyan didn’t have a tail. The saiyan made a complete circle and finally they both saw each other clearly. Deannar stood there silently as a mouse.

Goku:
“Wow! You snuck up on me like a pro! Hi there, my name is Goku.” Goku said walking closer to the young man holding out his hand.

Deannar says nothing but stares at this saiyan named Goku thinking to himself…

Deannar:
(“Hum, his face looks familiar to me.”)

Goku:
“What’s yours?”
Deannar:
“Your face?”

Goku:
“My face? What about it?” Goku says placing his right hand on his face and feels cuts and bruises, “Awe, don’t worry about it, that can heal.”

Deannar:
“No, now I can see it clearly. It looks like my fathers’.”

Goku:
“Your what?”

Dannar:
“His fathers’ young warrior.” Dannar walked from the top of the hill towards the bottom, “I am Dannar and this is my grandson Deannar. Do you know Deeja, Goku?”

Goku:
“Well Dannar, I never heard of-” Goku pauses because he notices, “Oh wow! You have a tail Deannar and it’s all white. That’s strange; I thought my son was the only half-saiyan anywhere.”

Deannar:
“That I am and you are a full blooded tailless saiyan, and you call me strange.”

Dannar:
“Now Deannar, do not be rude.” Dannar says in a stern voice.

Deannar then tilted his head downward.

Deannar:
“Sorry grandfather and sorry Goku if I have disrespected you in any way.”

Goku:
“Hay don’t sweat it Deannar and losing my tail is a long story.”

Dannar:
“Well, we are about to have breakfast Goku. You can explain that long story then with my family and I, if you do not mind?” Dannar asks with a wrinkle smile.

Goku:
“O-boy, would I. I’m starved!”

Dannar:
“And you can also tell us on how you came to this world.”

Goku:
“Sure thing Dannar but how far do we have to go? I’m really hungry.” Goku rubbed his growling stomach.

Dannar:
“Humm, this is the Hanlees valley and I have not been here in years.” Dannar looked around holding his chin, “Let…me…see-Ah yes. About sixteen thousand in that direction.” The old man points using his finger as a guide.

Goku:
“Sixteen thousand miles!”

Dannar:
“No need to be alarmed young warrior. My people and I may not be very strong but we do have a quick means of transport. Deannar, you will take Goku to the dining hall. I will be there shortly with your sister.”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”

While Naidacon’s two suns crept up and over the horizon Deannar walked over to Goku and grabbed his left wrist. An without hesitation place his two fingers in the center or his forehead and whisked themselves away. In a flash they both stood in front of the dining hall…

Goku:
“Wow-wee! Sixteen thousand miles just like that!” says the excited Goku.

Deannar looked at Goku strangely and wonders…

Deannar:
(“This saiyan Goku is getting stranger at every turn. A simple transport with the ‘Instant Transmission Technique’ amazes him so.”)

The saiyans from the inside of the dining hall stopped eating for their senses picked up a strange presence…

Zean-la:
“Deeja, what is the matter? Do not tell me that you are finished. You would usually eat a couple dozen servings of food before you have filled.” Zean-la looks at her now distracted husband. She didn’t begin to understand until she looked around and saw that all of the saiyans has ceased eating. They just sat there at first, then slowly turned their heads towards the dining hall entrance staring. Deeja then moved out of his seat and walked towards the entrance as the rest of his crew followed.

Zean-la:
“Deeja, where are you all going?” asked Zean-la with a concerned expression.

When Deeja and his group stepped out of the dining hall doors, they saw his son healing a male saiyan.

Goku:
“Uh Deannar, what are you doing? And why are your hands glowing that green color?” Goku’s head was down as he watched and asked. Deannar says nothing and finishes healing Goku. Within fifteen seconds all of his opened wounds were healed completely, “Whoa, so that’s what you were doing. Man, I feel great! You guys are full of-” Goku words were cut short for what his eyes saw when he looked up seeing Deeja, “Radditz! What are you doing here? I could have sworn me and Piccolo finished you off back on earth a while back. I guess I was wrong and it looks to me like you brought some friends with you this time.”

Deeja’s eyes couldn’t believe what they were seeing. He’d only seen his little brother once, since Goku was a baby on planet Vegeta and in amazement…

Deeja:
“Kakairot?”

Goku:
“So you do remember me huh? Well that’s good because it’s different this time. An believe me, I won’t underestimate your power levels, even if they don’t feel like much.”

Goku knew all too well about the ruthlessness of his older brother Radditz and wasn’t taking any chances. The ground around him suddenly began to shake as Goku screams…

Goku:
“YERRAAAH!”

In a blink he transforms into a super saiyan. The transformation stunned them all but not out of fear, but from sheer excitement. They also felt and knew that Goku was misled and didn’t know the truth about them, so they didn’t try to defend themselves nor did they attack him. Well, not all of them were so understanding, namely Deannar; and his shock didn’t last long…

Deannar:
(“He tricked me. Goku acted on my ignorance and lead me to believe that he was friendly. Well that is alright, I too have a surprise.”) Deannar quickly leaped between Goku and his father knowing that Goku was far to powerful for any of them to stop. But little did anyone know he to have a secret and he was the only one capable of stopping this new menace, -“Not to worry father, I will not let you or anything in this world come to any harm!”

Deeja:
“Deannar, what are you-?” Deeja’s words were drowned out by son’s screams…

Deannar:
“RRREEEYYAA!” As the power of a super saiyan rushes through Deannar's body, Goku realizes something to himself a little too late…

Goku:
(“Deannar's transforming into a super saiyan, I can feel it. And he just called Radditz his father, but Dannar said Deeja was his father.”) Goku pauses for a second then says-“Uh-oh.”

Before Deannar's transformation was complete the ground around him began to split and crack like streams of lighting. An soon, in blink of an eye there were now two super saiyans standing across from each other…

Goku:
(“I…I can’t believe his power level, it’s so high. If I am reading him correctly, I think he’s even stronger than me.”) Goku was unable to move his mouth from the shock on how strong Deannar was. Before Goku could prepare himself for Deannar’s attack he held out his right hand and tries to speak-“Deannar wait, there’s something not right-” Deannar quickly places two fingers to the center of his forehead and disappears. “-about…this?” Goku watches Deannar vanish.

AV:
[“OH NO GOKU, YOU SHOULDN’T HAVE DONE THAT. BECAUSE YOU’RE NOT FIGHTING FREIZA, IT’S A YOUNG SUPER SAIYAN AND A VERY POWERFUL ONE AT THAT. WILL GOKU BE ABLE TO EXPLAIN HIMSELF IN TIME, OR IS IT ALL OUT WAR? IT’S ALL GOING TO BE GIVEN TO YOU IN THE NEXT EXCITING EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE SINS OF THE FATHER

CH: 8
SINS OF THE FATHER

AV:
[“THIS IS NOT GOOD GOKU, NOT GOOD AT ALL. YOU HAVE A YOUNG AN SEEMS TO BE MORE POWERFUL SUPER SAIYAN BREATHING DOWN YOUR NECK. I THINK YOU BETTER TRY AN SAYS SOMETHING CREATIVE AND SMOOTH OUT THE SITUATION…”]

Goku:
(“He’s gone and I can’t feel him anywhere. But how can this be, no one can drop their power level that far without dying or could he?”)

Suddenly Goku catches a small glimpse of Deannar’s presence to his left, then he looks in that direction, an without further notice… “SMASH!” Deannar surprises Goku with a blurring straight left jab knocking him nearly a hundred feet away, until Goku rolls with the blow by skidding on the ground completely over his back, then the back of his neck and head onto his hands. Just with the power of his arms he pushes his body into the air. An when Goku lands on his feet Deeja cries out.

Deeja:
“Deannar, stop! Stop fighting your Uncle Kakairot and get over here…now!”

Goku couldn’t see Deannar but he sure could feel him. Goku felt Deannar behind him and when he turned around Deannars’ fist was inches away from his face. The moment their green eyes meet they both say at the same time.

Goku & Deannar:
“Uncle!”

Deannar disappears from in front of Goku and then reappears in front of Deeja…

Deannar:
“Father, I-”

Deeja:
“No need to explain anything at this time my son. There are other things that should be cleared first.” Deeja looked at Goku in the short distance. Soon as Deeja finishes what he was saying, his son powered down to his normal self. Goku then wipes a trickle of blood from his mouth and rubs the back of his neck, an wonders to himself while powering down.

Goku:
(“Man, what do they feed this kid. If he would hit me a little bit harder, I could’ve been knocked out cold. Or if I didn’t brace myself from his attack when I felt him. He could have taken my head clean off while I was a super saiyan.”)

Then out of nowhere…

Dannar:
“I agree with Deeja!” Dannar stood in the dining hall doorway with Nala together holding the doors open, “Now come on in everyone and receive your fill! You first Goku, you are not just our guest, you are family.”

Goku takes a short flight, then lands inside the small crowd and walks pass them going inside the dining hall. Deannar follows behind Goku but is pulled to the side by his grandfather before he could go inside with everyone else and asks in a low voice…

Dannar:
“Why did you not show your true strength my son?”

Deannar:
“Grandfather, how did you know I held back?”

Dannar:
“There is very little I do not know my son and that could be a gift or a curse. Now Deannar, answer my first question.”

Deannar:
“It was because I did not want a possible more powerful enemy to have that advantage over me of knowing my full strength.”

Dannar:
“Good-very good Deannar, your strength is not the only thing that is improving. Now go, go inside and take your seat at the family table.”

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.”

Deannar and his grandfather walked inside and sat down an soon after, tray after tray of food was brought to them. And before Goku sat down and began to feed his hungry stomach, he spoke out loud…

Goku:
“Before I begin to eat, I must tell everyone that I’m sorry for the way I acted.”

Deeja:
“Yes Kakairot, we all know and understand; now sit down and eat your fill. You thought I was our older brother Radditz and your reunion with him was not a pleasant one.”

Goku:
“I guess my actions proved that point, huh?”

Deeja:
“Maybe, but to know you have achieved a pentacle very few of us saiyans have not even begun to grasp, well not including my son is very invigorating. Now sit and eat, all will be explained after breakfast.”

Goku:
“Thanks.” Goku sits down in his seat and began to eat. The rest of the saiyans soon began to eat and eat they did. After the first set of breakfast trays came out and emptied, another set came, then another and another until…

Goku:
“MMM, this is great! I don’t know what it is but it’s delicious.” Goku says gulping down a spoon full of food.

Every one of them thought it was refreshing to see how Goku acted; it was so cheerful and carefree. After twenty-three serving of food Goku looks over to his brother and says with a mouth full of food.

Goku:
“So, if you’re…not Radditz, then…gulp! You must be Deeja?”

Deeja put down his spoon and pushed his plate forward, then wipes his mouth with his napkin.

Deeja:
“Yes, I am one of your older brothers. Our father is Bardock, a child of planet Vegeta…”

Deeja filled Goku in on how he and his crew arrived there an when finished, Goku told them how he also got to they’re new world.

Goku:
“It was all because of Freiza.” Goku says with a mean look.

There was murmuring amongst the saiyans and the creatures that were once in Freiza’s service.

Deeja:
“Silence, all of you!” shouts Deeja and when the crowd fell silent, “Continue Kakairot.” Deeja says wanting to hear more. Goku told them about his home earth, the dragon balls and their prince Vegeta.- “So Kakairot, our prince is still alive and you have destroyed Lord Freiza, the creature who has ruled over our race with an iron fist for decades?”

Goku:
“Yeah, I did. He left me no other choice.”

Deeja:
“I bet he did not; to lose twice in less than fifty years was too much for him to bear. Well enough about him, you said something about the ship you arrived here in. Is it still intact Kakairot?”

Goku:
“Yeah, it is.”

Deeja:
“Good, now Lo?” Deeja looks to his old friend.

Lo:
“Yes Deeja.”

Deeja:
“Go and retrieve the information-chip from his ship. If I am correct, everything we have not seen since we came too this world should be on it. Nala will show you the way, since she was with master Dannar and not here dinning with us where she was suppose to be.” Deeja says while looking crudely at his daughter.

Nala looked back at him with an uneasy smile.

Deeja:
“Go to the sphere ship Nala, Lo will trace you there.”

Nala:
“But father, why can I not do this on my own?”

Deeja:
“Go-” Deeja’s begins to say with tight eyes as Nala finishes quickly saying…

Nala:
“-To the sphere ship, got it” soon as she finishes she disappears. Half a second later, Nala arrives at the sphere ship. A few seconds more, Lo appears and she curiously asks him, “So uncle Lo, what is a…information chip?”

Lo made his way to the sphere ship, then went inside and explained to Nala about the chip.

Lo:
“The ships’ information chip is a recording of everything that has happen since we arrived on this planet.”

Nala:
“Like what?”

Lo wraps his fingers around what he was searching for, in addition to giving it a light gentle tug, the chip was rested in the center of his hand while answering…

Lo:
“The truth.”

Lo together with Nala, both vanish. When they arrive back to the dining hall Lo saw his brother Hy carrying a holo-screen inside. They both went inside behind him and saw that all the tables were arranged differently. The dining area was looking more like a theater, because people were crowded inside and has taken seats. Lo went over to his brother and began talking with him while Nala looked further throughout the crowd an soon saw her brother and grandfather, but didn’t see her father or new uncle. She then walks over too them and asks…

Nala:
“What is going on grandfather? And where is father and uncle Kakairot?”

Dannar:
“Look around you child.” Dannar says while as Nala’ eyes scans dozen upon dozens of faces, he then continues, “Those creatures are all here to see what they’re pasts’ had to hold. Many will witness the wrongs in their former selves. Many will feel the pain, which they have caused others. But most of all, many will try to make amends for that pain, no matter if their lives must be no more in that willing process.”

Nala:
“Grandfather, if you already know these things, why not just tell them first?”

Dannar:
“Experience my daughter. There is no better teacher than that. They must all see with new eyes and new directions on their past evil ways, understand?”

Nala:
“I think I do grandfather.” Nala scratched her head with a confused look on her face.

Dannar:
“And for your first question Nala, your father has taken your uncle into the main house too fresh him up and find new clothes for him to ware, for we all await here for their return.”

Momentarily Goku, Deeja and his wife walked into the now over crowded dining hall…

Goku:
“Jeez Deeja, did all of these creatures serve Freiza?”

Deeja:
“Yes Kakairot, we all have. Except for Zean-La, her father and the Naidacon’s first generation of children.”

Soon as Deeja finishes his talk with Goku, he glances at Lo who was standing near the holo-screen and slowly nodes his head. Lo quickly bends down and presses a single button on the holo unit, then inserted the chip of valued information. The 3-D image screen came on and to everyone inside saw the destruction of each of their home worlds at the hand of someone they all served without question…Freiza.

A thick wall of mixed emotions filled the room, but no one made a sound; until Nala’s broke the silence…

Nala:
“Please, someone. Turn it off! I cannot stand the sight of this!”

But no one did, so she began to walk towards the exit. Deeja grabs her and turns her back to the scene of mass eradication of life. Nala held her head down quickly.

Deeja:
“Raise your head Nala and bear witness to the countless slaughter of billions upon trillions. Look at what Freiza was, what…I was. And make sure with your powers that it does not turn you into what we were.”

Nala:
“Father, you did those things? You took the lives of harmless innocents?” Nala opened her eyes while snatching away from her father.

Deeja:
“Yes.” Deeja says without a second thought.

Nala:
“Then all that you taught Deannar and I was a lie? Just another way to mold us into something you wanted, like a bowl of clay?”

Deeja walked in front of his daughter and gently grabs the top of each of her arms.

Deeja:
“My daughter, there is no excuse for what I have done in my past and-”

Nala:
“Take your hands off of me!”

Deeja:
“Nala, you must listen. I know you are angry at me-”

Nala:
“I said-” Every emotion inside of Nala was entangled into one. Love, hate, confusion, mistrust and all of it, cannot- will not, be contained, “-take…your…hands…off of me!”

The power inside of her was now nearly pass their normal limits, then in a few seconds, beyond even that. And now the very ground beneath every ones feet began to vibrate violently. Deeja felt this also but refuses to let go and soon saw Nala’s hair began to stand on end and flash from white to gold. Deannar stood beside his grandfather, felt and knew…

Deannar:
“Grandfather, the change of a super saiyan is almost in Nala’s reach!”

AV:
[“WHAT DID I TELL YOU Z-FANS, THE HITS JUST KEEP ON KNOCKING YOU OUT OF YOUR SHOES. AND IF DEEJA DOESN’T LET GO OF HIS DAUGHTER, THE LAST THING HE’S GOING TO WORRYING ABOUT IS LOSING HIS FOOT WARE. SO BE HERE FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.]

NEXT EPISODE
A FEMALE SUPER SAIYAN?

CH: 9 A FEMALE SUPER SAIYAN?

AV:
[“IN THE LAST EPISODE NALA WAS SEEMED TO BE GOING THROUGH A FEW CHANGES…”]

Deannar:
“Grandfather, Nala is making the change!”

Dannar:
“I see Deannar and I suspect your father knows it as well.” Dannar says with little concern.

Deannar:
“But if he does not release her, he may be killed!”

Dannar:
“Deeja knows this as well my son but does not care. In one-way or another we all must atone for our sins. I guess this is one way he can make some good out of it, by giving your sister a gift from father to daughter. By not letting her go and at that point she will achieve something most saiyans will never have.”

Goku stood beside them watched and knew…

Goku:
“Deeja, let go of your daughter! She’s at a state of mind where your life could be at serious risk, even if she isn’t trying to hurt you!”

Deeja:
“I know the risk in what I am doing Kakairot, but I will not leave her like this. She is almost there; it’s all or nothing Kakairot!”

Dannar gave a silent order for everyone to leave the dining hall and without question they all do what he requested. The only ones who stayed were Dannar and his family.

Zean-la:
“Father, what is going on? What is happening to Nala?”

Dannar:
“All will be explained to you later my daughter but we must leave this instant.”

Deannar:
“But grandfather, we cannot leave them.”

Dannar:
“I do not intend to.” Dannar says grabbing each one of their arms, then adds, “But you must have faith.”

Then whisked themselves away. Deeja looks pass his daughter and watches them disappear…

Deeja:
“Kakairot, Dannar has taken the rest of my family out of here. I suggest you do the same before Nala finishes her transformation!”

Goku:
“I’m not going anywhere without you two!”

Deeja:
“Kakairot, there is not much time!” Deeja says as he powers up so that a light blue aura surrounded him, then finishes, “Because it is taking everything I have just to hold her at this stage!”

In a split second Goku transforms into a super saiyan while Nala’s moving power begins to shake the place apart…

Goku:
“Now listen to me! I can survive her transformation; you on the other hand, may not!”

Back outside four hundred feet away, the large crowd watched and waited silently, until finally their wait, was over…“BOOOOM!” A single but very large explosion erupts from inside the dining hall, leveling everything for nearly two hundred and fifty-feet.

Deannar:
“Grandfather, is my father alright?” Deannar asks as the debris fell and the smoke quickly began to clear.

Dannar looks to his grandson and spoke without looking at him…

Dannar:
“Long before you born my son, I told Deeja that he would have to make difficult choices in his near future and that his loyalties will be tested. So your question is not is he all right? It is…did he pass his test?”

The smoke almost instantly dissipated, because of Nala’s power surging out ward. She was standing where the dining halls use to be. Dannar watched his granddaughter holds on to her next evolutionary stage of her life.

Dannar:
“Yes my son, he has passed.”

Deannar:
“But where is he? I do not feel him or Uncle Kakairot.

Dannar looked to his left then too his right and then turned around in a complete circle while holding a smile…

Dannar:
“Nor your mother.”

Deannar paused for a moment then says…

Deannar:
“O, now I see.” An within seconds Zean-la, Goku and Deeja reappears ten feet away from the massive gathering. Every one’s eyes then looked towards Nala as she stood there gritting her teeth, holding on to her new climatic change. Sparks of white-hot electricity went in all around her body while tears ran down her cheek, “She did it grandfather and it seems she has went above a normal super saiyan.” The young boy says calmly with a straight face.

Dannar:
“Good-very, very good.” Dannar adds with a wide grin.

As Goku looks on he feels Nala’s power and knows…

Goku:
(“No way! A female super saiyan and her power level, it to, is even stronger than a regular super saiyan…namely me. I didn’t even know it could go any higher.”) Goku then looks towards the crowd of beings an wonder some more, (“All of these creatures’ power levels here are low and so were Nala and her brother’s. First, they can transport themselves thousands of miles in seconds. Then they’re children are super strong. Man how many other secrets do these guys have?”)

But before the over excited Goku could finish his thoughts. Nala powers down without it being her first choice and falls to her knees onto the scorched plain. As the ground stopped shaking…

Dannar:
“Go to your sister Deannar and teach her the way as I guided you.” Dannar placed his left hand on Deannars’ right shoulder while looking at him.

Deannar:
“But grandfather, I am not ready to teach.”

Dannar:
“Yes you are, for there is nothing more I can teach you.” Dannar said as he turns his head back to Nala and merely watches her momentarily, then turns and begins walking away and asks, “Understand?”

Deannar breathes in deeply while holding his head up high, then answers…

Deannar:
“Yes grandfather.” He then flies over to his sister, just as the eager Goku runs and catches up to Dannar an walks on the side of him. The two of them walked off together in silence but Goku’s curiosity got the better of him…

Goku:
“Uh, Dannar?”

Dannar:
“Yes Goku.”

Goku:
“What is this place?”

Dannar:
“Why, it is Naidacon.”

Goku:
“Yes, I know that but-”
Dannar:
“Goku, you must trust me on this, the less you know; the better.” Dannar says then pauses for a moment while looking around them making sure they were alone. An when he saw that they were, he continued but in a low voice, “I know what you are about to ask and my answer to your future question…is no.”

Goku then looks at Dannar strangely thinking…

Goku:
(“Man, how does he know what I’m about to say?”)

Dannar:
“Goku, do not think for a second that I do not trust you, but fighting is not skin deep with you and your kind. It is in your blood and I see that same look in your eyes, as I saw in Deeja’s. You want to train here and learn how to strengthen your skill.”

Goku:
“Yes, I do. But how did you know that?”

Dannar:
“Like I told my grandson and many others, there is very little I do not know and it can be a gift or curse.”

Goku:
“So what you saying is if you teach me what you know, I would somehow be putting my life in danger.”

Dannar:
“In a way yes and no. What I would be doing is putting your entire galaxy in peril.”

Goku:
“But how would you be doing that Dannar?”

Dannar:
“There is a storm coming Goku, you and your solar system should not get caught in its’ path.”

Goku:
“A storm? You mean danger, don’t you? You’re saying Naidacon is in some kind of danger?”

Dannar:
“Though I wish it was not true, but yes and that is only part of it.”

Goku:
“You mean to tell me there’s more?”

Dannar:
“More than what you think young warrior and this is why you cannot stay here for long.”

Goku:
“Why Dannar? I would like to stay here and fight alongside a family I never knew existed. And somehow I know I’m not even close to your strength, even as a super saiyan. I pick up on your power-level when I was transformed, but if you teach me-”

Dannar:
“I am truly sorry but I cannot full fill your request; besides young warrior, your fate lies elsewhere, not here on Naidacon.” Goku stopped walking and stood in silence with his head raised to the sky, -“There is no need to feel disappointed. I said I would not teach you but there are some things I can show you. A little something I have shown the others.” Dannar says smiling while placing two of his fingers in the center of his forehead.

Seven and a half months have passed and Goku’s time on the planet Naidacon was up. He was half way inside his ship and before getting completely inside. Goku waves to his new family and friends.

Goku:
“Good thing Porunga couldn’t just snatch me away from Naidacon when my friends and family tried to wish me back or I wouldn’t have learned as much as I did.”

Deeja:
“No Kakairot, he could not. It proves that Dannar is even more powerful than your mystic wish dragons but remember, no one must know of this place and of who showed you your new skill.”

Goku:
“Don’t worry Deeja, I won’t tell anyone. Your secret is safe with me. Good by Nala, Deannar and Zean-la. I hope we all get a chance to meet again one day. An thanks for the new clothes you guy gave me to wear back home. I’ll never forget you!”

Dannar:
“Never say never, young saiyan warrior.” Dannar says under his breath as he looks into Goku’s eyes.

While Goku enters his ship, Dannars’ eyes turned a glowing light gray. Within three seconds Goku was thrust into Naidacons’ upper atmosphere and without warning Goku’s eyes then also turned glowing light gray. Now back down on the planets’ surface, Dannar says a few words in an almost hypnotic way while looking at the tiny star sized saiyan ship…

Dannar:
“Yes, you will forget.”

An at the same moment Goku repeats Dannar’s words as if in some kind of trance…

Goku:
“I…will…forget.”

Just after Goku words, Dannar brakes contact and his eyes turn back a sandy-brown while Goku falls fast asleep.

Dannar:
(“You must sleep now my son. I have given you false memories on how you came by learning your new technique you now hold inside you. But only for your own protection, have a safe journey Goku; until we meet again.”) Dannar says to himself as he and all the others watch Goku’s ship disappear into deep space.

AV:
[“ALRIGHT Z’ITES, GOKU IS FINALLY ON HIS WAY BACK HOME. BUT FROM THE LOOKS OF THINGS HE HAS GOTTEN A QUICK BUT NEEDFUL CASE OF AMNESHA. IS IT ENOUGH TOO KEEP THE EARTH OUT OF HARMS REACH? SOME HOW I DOUBT IT, YOU’LL HAVE TO FIND OUT NEXT TIME ON DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE CLEAR AND PRESENT DANGER

CH: 10 CLEAR AND PRESENT DANGER

AV:
[“WE NOW VENTURE FORWARD INTO THE PRESENT, WHERE THE BEGINNING OF THE END OF THE DREEDED MAJIN-BUU HAS TAKEN PLACE.”]

All of the Z-fighters; Goku, Vegeta, Gohan, Trunks, Goten, Piccolo, Tein, a bald Krillin, Eighteen, Yamcha and even Videl were all training together. They trained in one of Bulma’s father large training areas where the walls, ceiling and floor were made of six-foot re-enforced steel. Goku and Vegeta were sparing together and both of them were powered up to a normal super saiyan. Their sparing match has been going on for forty minutes and no punches, kicks or concentrated energy blasts have been landed on either opponent…

Vegeta:
“Kakairot, I know you are better than this!” Vegeta says while still trying to hit Goku.

Goku:
“And so are you Vegeta. I can tell that you’re holding back also.”

Vegeta:
“Yes, you are correct Kakairot.” Vegeta discontinues the fight and looks around at everyone else who was sparing together.

There was Gohan vs. Piccolo and Krillin, Yamcha vs. Tein, Trunks going against Goten and lastly Eighteen vs. Videl. And Vegeta also knew that…

Vegeta:
“We are all holding back our true powers Kakairot. How about we all get out of this highly populated city and find a place that is a little bit more quite, agreed?” Vegeta with a sly grin on his face he looks back to Goku.

Goku:
“Agreed.” Goku says smiling back to Vegeta. He then looked at everyone and adds, “Hey guys, me and Vegeta were wondering if you wanted to go to a place, a little less populated; so we can all train a little more freely. If, you know what I mean?” ending his words with a wink.

Everyone was more than happy to do so, but no one could figure out where to go. So they all turned their head to the one person who might have a clue…

Goku:
“Hay Piccolo, do you have any ideas?”

Piccolo:
“Hump, sure. I might know a few places. Follow me.”

As they all take flight out of the nearest skylight, Gohan flies next to his father.

Gohan:
“Hey dad, isn’t Pan going to be upset when she gets back from circling the world and find us gone?”

Goku:
“Yep, and so is your mother Gohan.”

Thirty minutes later, they all land in an open field one hundred acres wide with not a soul in sight for miles around.

Piccolo:
“So, how’s this? Is this secluded enough for you guys or what?” Piccolo says with a serious look.

Gohan taps Piccolo’s on his shoulder and points in the direction of thirty feet in mid air above them. It showed Vegeta and his father powering up to super saiyan two cutting each other no slack.

Gohan:
“Does that answer your question Piccolo?”

Piccolo:
“Hump, sure does but does it answers yours?” Piccolo cuts his eyes towards Krillin and nodes his head.

When Krillin notices this he immediately understood and nods back at him. Within a split second the three of them were again, engaged in battle. Then when this was seen by the others, the rest of them followed suit by powering up and trying to best one another other, and this time no one was holding back. These separate battles lasted over an hour, until a quarter sized gray spiral appeared out of thin air. No one noticed it with their eyes but the powered up super saiyan two Goku did. He suddenly stopped sparing with Vegeta for a moment.

Vegeta:
“What is the matter Kakairot, is the pain to great for you or are you tired?”

As both saiyans stood on air bruised and bloody.

Goku:
“No, not really Vegeta. To tell you the truth, I’m just getting warmed up.”

Vegeta:
“Good, because so am-” Vegeta is cut short because he too now feels this strange force tugging at his scenes, “Kakairot, I do not mean to spoil our match. But do you feel that?” Vegeta says looking all around him.

Goku:
“Yeah, I do and it seems to be coming from all around us. I can’t seem to get a direct fix on it.” Goku cut his eyes from side to side.

Vegeta:
“Neither can I.?”

Just then the small gray spiral suddenly expanded ten feet into a large vortex but it wasn’t sucking anything into it. It just sat there spinning on air and was now seen an felt by all and the feeling wasn’t a good one.

Goku:
“Guys, heads up!”

The only thing they all could do was stare at it and wait.

Krillin:
“I have a bad feeling about this Piccolo.” Krillin floated nearby.

Piccolo:
“For once Krillin, I think you’re right. Because this is no ordinary natural event happening before our eyes.”

Krillin:
“Boy Piccolo, you sure do have an eye for the obvious.”

Piccolo:
“That’s not what I am taking about Krillin. This weird feeling, I know everyone else; including yourself can feel.”

Krillin:
“Yeah it’s bad, so what else is new?”

Piccolo:
“You’ve felt it before. Hell, we all have.”

Krillin stood there for a moment and concentrated an when he finished.

Krillin:
“Mmm, nope; you’re wrong Piccolo. I‘ve never felt anything like this.”

Piccolo:
“Yes Krillin, you have. The reason that it feels different is because it has somehow twisted and that could only mean-”

Piccolo quickly closed his eyes tightly and held his head down while biting hard down on his teeth, trying to hold back his emotions of dread. Videl slowly leaves android Eighteens’ side and drifts towards Gohan in mid air, an yells to him while looking at Piccolo…

Videl:
“Gohan, what’s eating at Piccolo?!”

Gohan:
“I-”

Before Gohan could utter an answer to his wife, energy beams came flying out of the vortex and one of them struck Videl in her back. The blast of energy went throughout her body like a surge of purple electricity, rendering her unconscious.

Gohan:
“Videl!” Gohan screams as he watches Videl’s body fall slowly.

Her body then steadily started to pick up speed rushing to meet the unforgiving ground below. Gohan quickly transforms into a super saiyan and in a tenth of a second he catches her before she hits the ground. Videl laid not moving in his arms as he lowers her to the grassy field. Just then more blasts of energy came flying out of the swirling vortex. Tein, Piccolo, Krillin, Eighteen and Yamcha; were dodging the streams of energy that was heading straight for them. None of the Z-fighters were hit and to answer the misplaced energy beams twenty-four humanoid robotic creatures hurled themselves out of the vortex followed by their leader. It looked more human than robot. As its body completely moved out of the gray doorway of matter, it began pressing buttons on the top of its wrist. Then the doorway behind what now was clearly seen was some sort of robotic-man. He began to press more buttons, an without warning six out of the twenty-four robotic creatures attacked in one wave going after the none saiyans. Goku didn’t move or try to help his friends in any way, for he knew something greater was a foot. Gohan slowly and gently laid Videl’s head on the ground while grabbing her wrist and felt her pulse.

Gohan:
“Thank goodness you’re alive. Now you just lie here, I’ll be back for you soon.” Gohan kisses his wife on the forehead.

Goku looks down at his son while powering down to his normal self.

Goku:
“Gohan, don’t! Power-down and regroup on Vegeta and me!

Gohan:
“But dad-”

Goku:
“No buts Gohan get over here, now!”

Vegeta stares at Goku and wonders…

Vegeta:
(“Kakairot knows something is wrong and so do I. I can tell just by looking at him that his saiyan blood thirst for battle and so does my own. But we both hesitate, knowing that these strange creatures are here for a purpose. And we will not go off half cocked and let others suffer for our mistakes.”) When Vegeta finishes what he was thinking he instantly yells out.- “Trunks! Goten! Get over here and power down to your normal selves!”

As Gohan, Trunks and Goten meet up with their fathers…

Gohan:
“Dad, Vegeta, what’s up?”

Trunks:
“Yeah dad, what’s wrong with you and Goku? You two have cold feet or something?” Trunks asks while he and Goten were still powered up to super saiyan level.

Vegeta doesn’t answer his son but gives him a foul look…

Trunks:
“Ok, ok powering down.” Trunks quickly powers down with Goten following suit without a word.

As the five Z-fighters labeled as none saiyans all do battle; this left the sixth robotic creature to a more vulnerable prey, Videl. But for its carelessness it didn’t know that Gohan noticed its intention.

Gohan:
“Oh no you don’t!”

Gohan quickly transforms back into a super saiyan. “WHOOS-VIZZZH!” An before the metallic creature could lay one hand on Videl. Gohan’s fists burst through its chest plate from behind and with one mighty flex of Gohans’ awesome power; blows the robotic creature to pieces…“BOOM!” Soon after, the rest of the Z-team finishes off the rest of six robots…

Krillin:
“Piccolo, even though we just beat those guys into scrap metal. I don’t feel any better.”

Piccolo:
“That’s because of one thing and one thing only Krillin-” Piccolo says as the leader of the robotic group began pressing a series of buttons on his wrist again in the distance. When he was finished Piccolo’s words continued. “-That was just the first wave. I’m betting the next one is going to be a lot harder.”

And with Piccolo’s words complete another group of six robotic creatures came rushing at them.

AV:
[“WHO IS ATTACKING THE UNSUSPECTING Z-FIGHTERS AND WHAT IS GOKU AND VEGETA WAITING FOR, AN NOT TRYING TO HELP THEIR FRIENDS? WELL, JUST BE HERE NEXT TIME TO FIND OUT ON DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE
WAVE NUMBER TWO

CH: 11 WAVE NUMBER TWO

AV:
[“ONCE MORE THE Z-FIGHTERS READY THEMSELVES FOR AN EVEN TOUGHER BATTLE AND GOHAN SEEMS TO HAVE TAKEN VIDELS’ PLACE. BUT WILL HIS STRENGHT BE ENOUGH? THE ONLY THING I CAN SAY IS KEEP READING Z-FANS”]

While the determined Gohan and Z-fighters fight on…

Trunks:
“Dad, why are those guys attacking everyone but us?”

The leader of the robotic squad slowly drifts towards the four saiyans.

Vegeta:
“I do not know son, but from the looks of things, we might be getting some answers.”

The controller of the robots:
“Why do you not fight saiyans? By now you would have joined in the battle for shear amusement. Maybe my first and second wave of Iccanoids bore you, yes?”

Vegeta folds his arms…

Vegeta:
“Sorry chrome dome but I am not playing your game.”

Eider:
“Well prince Vegeta, you surely enjoyed playing Freizas’ games, when you were in his service.”

Vegeta:
“What?” Vegeta gasp and wonders, (“Who is this creature and how does he know about me, an Freiza?”)

Eider:
“I can imagine what you are asking yourself Vegeta, but I have detailed files on you. An also have scan images of the others showing that they have saiyan blood coursing through their veins, well except the one known as Kakairot, he is pure. I am Eider. I would ask you all to give up but I would not want to insult you; nevertheless it would save you a lot of pain.”

Eider was a tall thin creature with an iron plate where his hair should have been. Moments later from behind him, a loud boom erupts over his right shoulder…“KA-BOOOM!!!” Eider knew what that sound was, it was the last of his second wave being destroyed. He immediately holds up his right wrist and began pressing more buttons. An when he was complete…

Eider:
“You are all excellent fighters. I congratulate you on defeating my second wave but I assure you all. You will not get passed my third.”

Eider then pressed one last button and the wave of six more Iccanoids came at the Z-team…

Krillin:
“Awe man, as if that second wave of tin cans didn’t take all I had.” Krillin says with low shoulders.

Tein:
“Suck it up Krillin. We must hold!”

Krillin:
“Hold for what Tein?”

Before Tein could reply, Piccolo flies close saying while powering-up…

Piccolo:
“Tein’s right Krillin, I figured it out as well. If we can take this lot out it will leave less for Goku and the others to deal with, because at this rate…the best should be kept for last.”

And now the third wave clashes with the Z-fighters. With speed and strength added twice as strong as the last, the Z-team began to fall one by one. First to fall was Yamcha; he was blind-sided by an energy beams. Followed by Eighteen, she was shot in the back. Then Krillin, coming to her aid. This only left Tein, Piccolo and Gohan. Gohan quickly finishes off two of the creatures by using strength and speeds, even though their robotic bodies where much faster than what they use to be.

Piccolo and Tein had a four against two battle, until both of them spilt themselves into two separate identical entities, making it a more even match. It was now two Piccolos’ and two Tein’s against the four super strong Iccanoids robots. Goku notices that his sons’ battle was over and quickly calls to him…

Goku:
“Gohan, now power down and get over here!”

Gohan knew his dad well enough to come when called. So he flew too his father and powered down.

Gohan:
“Dad, what’s the problem? We’ve got these guys on the ropes.”

Vegeta:
“O-really Gohan, then look over your shoulder.” Vegeta points behind Gohan, Gohan turns around noticing Piccolo and Tein fall to the ground, “If you would have listened before rushing into a fight to show off your powers. You would have noticed that the ringleader over there is reading the power you guys were giving off in battle. Using it to making what he calls his Iccanoids, more stronger.”

Goku:
“Vegeta’s right Gohan, that creep is using our powers against us.”

Gohan:
“Well guys, why didn’t you say something in first place?” Then in a blink quickly Gohan goes after Eider.

Goku:
“Gohan!” Goku screams, but his son was already in motion to combat what he thought was the source of all their problems.

Vegeta:
“Kakairot, Gohan knows better than to rush blindly into battle. What is his problem?”

Goku:
“It’s Videl, Vegeta. She has been hurt and so has Gohan’s pride.”

Vegeta:
“Yes, I see now, and clearly understand his actions Kakairot.”

Goku:
“For now Vegeta, let’s sit back and see how tough this Eider really is.”

Vegeta:
“Fine by me.”

Gohan engages his enemy swinging hard and fast with his left hand at the face of Eider. But only hit a force field that stood three inches around Eider’s body causing no damage. Eider then smiles.

Eider:
“So, this is the mighty power of the saiyan race? Hump, pathetic. But what else would I expect from a half breed like yourself?”

His taunts angered Gohan, so the youth reared back with his right fist and struck the force field even harder. Again the impact was absorbed by Eider’s body shield.

Eider:
“Even your strongest blows will not protect your lovely wife from me, boy.”

A sly smirk enters Gohans’ face…

Gohan:
“Who said anything about that was my strongest blow and don’t for a second think that I don’t know what you’re trying to do.”

Eider:
“Really boy, then by all means, enlighten me.” Says the over confident Eider.

Gohan:
“Gladly, you’re trying to bait me into releasing more of my power to strengthen your own. But trust me, I have more than enough too handle you buddy.”

Gohan then backs away from Eider in mid air and powers up leaving his hair black while red sparks crackled around his body, using this technique that the elder Kai taught him.

Gohan:
“HAAAYA!” Gohan yells while completing his transformation, then adds, “Now Eider please, no pretty please let your little force field try an absorb this.”

Gohan then draws back his left arm and holds it back while opening his fist, exposing his palm. In its center, a glowing white-yellowish color soon began to appear. Eider quickly holds his wrist panel up and took a reading on Gohan’s power level and realizing in horror…

Eider:
(“Th…that is too much power, but how is this possible? I anticipated them becoming a super saiyan but this was totally unexpected.”)

Gohan quickly jerks his arm forward releasing a concentrated blast of energy directly at Eider. Eider speedy avoids Gohan’s blast but is caught off guard by the young man’s increased speed. Eider was smashed in his face but his force field took the brunt of the blow. A blow that sent him reeling fifty feet into a nearby cliff side of solid dark orange earth.

Goten:
“That’s right Gohan, get him!”

Trunks:
“Yeah, teach him a lesson he’ll never forget!”

Goku and Vegeta stood back with straight serious faces and observes the fight. Moments later, Eider slowly crawls his way out of the crater in the side of the cliff side, then lifts his body out of the hole into the air cursing.

Eider:
“This is an outrage! My force field is down! But it is specifically designed for absorbing any amount of physical energy, direct or indirectly thrown its’ way. And channeling it back threw me making myself stronger!”

Vegeta:
“Maybe your machinery had a defect Eider.” Vegeta says smiling

Goku:
“Or maybe you really didn’t know what you were up against.” Adds Goku.

Eider:
“That may or may not be the answer but that does not mean I am beaten so easily.” Eider says as he creeps threw the air towards Gohan.

Gohan:
“Well Eider, hearing that just put a smile on my face.” Gohan says with a grin while he tightens both of his fists.

With just one gesture of attack from Eider, Gohan moved at lightning speed at him. When they both made physical contact with each other, Eider swung about forty or fifty times at super speed directly at Gohan, but couldn’t lay one punch on his untouchable target.

Eider:
“So, you are afraid to get hit by me whelp?” Eider says while swinging wildly.

Gohan answers by holding still and is met with a right and left fist to the face. Followed by a right fist to the stomach and with this blow to the mid-section made Gohan rear forward. Eider then takes advantage of this by striking Gohan in his back, with a double axe handle. Seconds after, Gohan’s body struck the ground with earth shaking force making a hole the size of half a football field. Silence rings out for a brief moment as Eiders’ ego shoot pass the stars and a wide grin enters his face…

AV:
[“OH NO! WILL GOHAN BE THE FIRST CASUALTY? FIND OUT ON THE NEXT EXCITING EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE
EIDER THE UNCHALLANGED

CH: 12
EIDER THE UNCHALLANGED

AV:
[“WHEN WE LAST LEFT, GOHAN WAS EATING DIRT. IS GOHAN OUT OF THE FIGHT SO SOON? WELL, CONTINUE READING TO FIND OUT Z-FANS.”]

Eider:
“Hah! Now which one of you upstarts is saiyan enough to face Eider the unchallenged?” Eider, with a swelled head looked to remaining four saiyans as he lands twenty feet away from them.

Goku, Vegeta, Trunks and Goten all just stood there looking back at Eider knowing that his battle with Gohan was far from over.

Vegeta:
“Listen clown, maybe you do know something about me. But you know nothing about Gohan, because I know for a fact that he is far from being defeated.”

Eider:
“Oh and how can you be so sure about the boy, O-mighty saiyan prince?”

Vegeta:
“For one, when Gohan was a mere boy, I witnessed him challenge a being that was a hundred times stronger than himself and that being name was Freiza. And yet he lives to tell the tale about surviving the ordeal on the planet Namek. He is not a boy any more Eider, he is a man and a very pissed off one at that.”

Then suddenly as Vegeta’s words were finished the ground around them began to vibrate violently and with the shaking earth, a smirk appears on the right side of Vegeta’s face. An with one mighty up-helve Gohan erupts from the ground, like a hot spring geyser.

Gohan:
“Eider, I hope that wasn’t your best; because if was…you’re history.”

Gohan stops in mid air and stares looking down at his now trembling enemy…

Eider:
(“I cannot believe this. I put everything I had into those blows and yet he is unfazed. I must report this news to my mistress at once. And in order for me to do that I must quickly open an inter-dimensional portal and move past this upstart. I can do that by using the rest of the Iccanoids as a distraction.”) Eider thought to himself as he lifts his control panel up, and coldly notices, (“Blast, my forward lateral button has been damaged on my control panel and my link with the Iccanoids is severed. That means not only will I be alone in this; the portal that will open for me will be fifty feet away. This is not going to be easy work to get past this boy on my own. He is simply too strong and fast to avoid…”) Eider then looks down from Gohan, then around him at the helpless unconscious Z-fighters and instantly came up with a solution while finish thinking, (“Unless…”)

He then raises his body into the air while putting both of his hands together in front of him, but soon they slowly open and at the center was a concentrated ball of red energy. It started off about the size of a golf-ball and then abruptly it began to grow larger and larger…

Eider:
“You took my strength in stride boy, but now will you try my awesome power?”

Gohan:
“Hump, I can take whatever you can dish out Eider. Do your worst.” Gohan stuck out his chest bracing himself in mid air.

Eider:
(“Perfect, the foolish boy is taking the bait.”) Eider’s energy ball was now the size of a basketball, “Now child, feel my power!”

Eider then turns both hands one over the other, so that the energy ball sat on a cushion of air in his right hand. He extended his right hand back, high above his head; then pitches Gohan a deadly fastball.

Gohan didn’t move an inch. He welcomed the chance to prove his point that Eider’s power was nothing compared to his own. And Gohan was so wrapped up in his pride that he didn’t notice that Eider was quickly pressing the buttons on his damaged wrist panel. An within seconds the portal was open. It opened fifteen above the distracted Gohan while Eiders’ energy ball was now two seconds in front. But before the red ball of energy could strike Gohan, it almost instinctively goes around him and heads to the unaware Z-fighters.

Gohan:
“Eider, you coward!”

Gohan quickly turns around and goes after the runaway energy ball that headed for his wife and friends. Eider then immediately speeds for his portal exit but before he could reach the dimensional door, he hears a loud smash from behind him…“CRASH!” His body suddenly stopped in mid flight five feet from the vortex, and in his chest he feels a sharp pain while looking down; he notices a white fisted glove jetting threw his more mechanical, than fleshy chest plate. Then shortly, a voice and a face arose from over his right shoulder…

Vegeta:
“You may have tricked the less experienced Gohan, Eider. But your little ploy will not work on me.”

Vegeta then slowly turns his fist upward and opens his hand quickly while the center of his palm began to glow with light blue energy.

Eider:
“But…h…how did…you know?” Asked the now in pain Eider.

Vegeta:
“Simple fool. It is exactly what my former self would have done for self preservation.”

Eider:
“Well, you may have…destroyed me…prince Vegeta, but more powerful soldiers…will come and take…my place.”

Vegeta:
“That maybe true Eider; let them come. But you will not be around to see it. Now good bye and good riddance.”

Vegeta releases an energy blast that takes Eiders’ head clean off his shoulders. Soon after that was done the portal disappeared and the remaining Iccanoids self-destructed. Vegeta drops his right arm and Eider’s headless body falls to the ground. An almost at the same time, the angered Gohan intercepts Eider’s energy ball, by getting in front of it and swatting it aside. He then looks up an notices that Vegeta has done what he was about to do after he took care of Eider’s trickery. Gohan then flew over to Vegeta.

Gohan:
“Vegeta, he was mine!”

Vegeta:
“If you say so Gohan, but if you really wanted the kill. You would have realized that you are not alone on the battlefield. One of us could have watched over the others while you took care of that weak-link Eider.”

Gohan:
“Hmm, you do have a point Vegeta, sorry. I just kind of lost it.”

Gohan then turns and flies back to his unconscious wife and friends while Goku drifts close to Vegeta.

Goku:
“Vegeta, was that necessary?”

Vegeta:
“Yes Kakairot, destroying Eider was totally necessary. You know as I, Eider was just a pawn in a much bigger scheme of things to come.”

Goku:
“That’s true but-”

Vegeta:
“Kakairot, Kakairot; still the soft hearted saiyan. One day that soft heart of yours, will-”

Suddenly another strange feeling silenced Vegeta’s words in their tracks.

Goten:
“Dad! Do you guys feel that?”

Goten and Trunks quickly drifts over to their fathers’ positions while both of them looked in all directions.

Goku:
“Yeah son, I sure do. Vegeta, how about you?”

Vegeta:
“Yes I do Kakairot, but I cannot pin point on where this one begins or ends either.”

Goku:
“Alright guys, everyone get our backs to each other. Gohan get over here, it’s not over yet!”

Gohan:
“I understand dad, I can feel it too!”

Gohan stopped what he was doing and zips to their side and fills in the empty space.

Goku:
“Alright everyone, power up!”

Goku powers up to a super saiyan three as Vegeta quickly cuts his eyes over to Goku.

Vegeta:
“Kakairot! At first you tell us not too power-up but now you are at super saiyan three statuses. What is going on?”

Goku:
“I’m not sure Vegeta. I probably haven’t felt that other feeling before when Eider arrived, but this one I have.”

Vegeta:
“When and where?”

Goku:
“I’m not sure of that either but what I do know is to not take this one lightly Vegeta.”

Vegeta:
“Well, you will not get any arguments from me Kakairot.”

Vegeta powers-up to his highest level of super saiyan, as Gohan, Trunks and Goten follows suit. The five super saiyans stand back to back huddled in a circle covering all directions, an as minutes passed they haven’t spotted nothing, until Trunks darts his eyes right then left and back to his right an notices a group of eight beings standing on a nearby cliff top with hoods covering their faces and long black cowls covering the rest of their bodies.

Trunks:
“Hey guys, look over there! We’ve got company!” Trunks says pointing with his left index finger.

As the rest of the super saiyans turn their heads, they also notice the eight darkly dressed figures, they were all different sizes.

Goten:
“Whoa Trunks, where did they come from?”

Trunks:
“I don’t know but they weren’t there a second ago.”

Noticing their levels of power…

Gohan:
“Maybe, maybe not. At least their power levels are low but not much lower than the last ones.”

Vegeta:
“That is because they are hiding they’re true power levels. That is something even you should know Gohan.”

Goku:
“Vegeta’s right Gohan, they are stronger than they appear. That’s why I’m going first and the rest of you will cut in when the time is right.”

As soon as Goku finished what he was saying, he speeds forward to combat the eight strangers. One of the eight lifts their body into the air towards Goku. An when they meet, the power of a super saiyan three was put to the test. Both warriors swung and blocked each other’s punches and kicks for the first five minutes. Goku suddenly backs off from his adversary in mid air…

Goku:
“Man, you’re good. You’ve blocked or avoided my strongest blows. Well I guess I just have to turn things up a bit. HIIIIIYAAA!” Goku screams as the radiant power of a super saiyan three rises as high as he can push it without burning himself out too quickly.

The darken cloaked figure did not seem to be impressed. It just stood there in the evening sky waiting for Goku to reach his full potential. Then within fifteen seconds Goku’s ultimate power up was complete.

Goku:
“Alright fella, round two!” Goku says while placing both of his wrists together down by his right side saying, “KAAA-MEEEE-”

Gohan:
“O-man, dad is really going all out!”

Vegeta:
“Yes, I see Gohan. Your father is not holding back at all this time, something must be terribly wrong.”

Trunks:
“Why do you say that dad?”

Vegeta:
“Because Trunks, the first time I have seen Kakairot go this far was when I came to clam the dragon ball for myself. The time when we went head to head holding nothing back. At this level and range, his Kameyameha wave could destroy five planet earths’ ten times over.”

Gohan:
“What?! You mean dad’s risking the fate of the planet on one guy?”

Goten, Gohan and Trunks faces held the look of dread on their faces.

Vegeta:
“Boys, do not be afraid. I must say, you have a lot to learn. Kakairot knows if a creature can stand up to his direct form as a super saiyan three, then it can also stand up against his indirect power as well. Kakairot is just trying to soften him up a bit.” Says a not concerned Vegeta folding his arms.

A blue circular tiny ball of light began to appear inside Goku’s hands.

Goku:
“-YAAAAA-MEEEEE-” And when he finishes by pushing both hands forward, “-HAAAAAA!”

The extremely large Kameyameha wave shot from Goku’s palms directly at its’ intended target. The unknown creature did just the opposite of moving out if the way. It crossed its arms over its’ chest and ducked its head a little too brace for impact. Within a split second it was engulf inside the blue wave of death that could have easily decimated the sun itself. The wave only disintegrated its cape and cowl, an what stood forth was a light green skinned creature, with its’ skin still smoldering. Goku quickly controlled the wave of death harmlessly into space as the unfazed creature drops its arms to the side and tilted its’ head up, exposing its face. An too everyone and Goku’s surprise…

Goku:
“It’s a girl!?”

AV:
[“AND SHE’S A REAL LOOKER GOKU, BUT I DON’T THINK YOU SHOULD LOWER YOU GUARD BECAUSE OF THAT FACT. WILL GOKU’S SOFTHEARTED NATURE TAKE OVER? JUST STICK AROUND FOR THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE MORE THAN A MATCH

CH: 13
MORE THAN A MATCH

AV:
[“WHAT DO WE HAVE HERE Z-FANS, A YOUNG WOMAN WHO CAN STAND UP TO A KAMEYAMEHA WAVE THAT WAS SET ON OVERKILL? WELL THIS LITTLE EPISODE SHOULD PROVE TO BE VERY INTERESTING, VERY INTERESTING INDEED…”]

Everyone was surprised to see a female, standing before them, especially Goku.

Goku:
“It’s a girl!”

Velcree:
“A woman too be exact and her name is Velcree.” The woman says looking at Goku.

Goku:
“And you’re a tough one at that Velcree, for you too not even have a scratch from my Kameyameha Wave.” Goku says with a tight grin.

Velcree:
“So that is what you call that little fireworks display?”

The woman known as Velcree had thin three-inch gold bands around her head, top arms, wrists and at the top of her thighs. While warring a six-inch gold belt around her waist equip with a turn dial for a buckle. She had long black hair and light green skin.

Goku:
“Fireworks display? Hump, whatever. What are you here for?”

Velcree:
“Why for you of course Goku.”

Goku:
“Hmm, that’s what I thought.” Goku places his two fingers to the center of his forehead then continues, “You want me, you got me.” then vanishing in mid air.

Velcree simply close her eyes and smile to herself.

Velcree:
“Why this old trick, you got to be joking. I played this game when I was a child.”

In a flash Goku appears behind Velcree and tries too catch her off guard with her back turned. He suddenly swings with a straight left jab to the back of her head. But Velcree seemed to have predicted what he was going to do. And in a spilt second she leans to her right and quickly grabs his left wrist with her left hand, then quickly pushing her right elbow into his exposed stomach, knocking almost all the wind out of him. Then soon after, grabbing his head and neck from behind her; an tosses him over her left shoulder. Velcree's toss was so powerful that when Goku’s body hit the earth, it went nearly fifty feet into the ground cracking it in all directions.

Goten:
“Vegeta did you see that?”

Vegeta:
“Yes Goten. These creatures must be the soldiers Eider was referring too.”

Soon after, Goku bursts forward from the earth and flies back too eye level with Velcree saying while brushing dirt from his torn clothes…

Goku:
“Man, you’re not only tough, but you’re quick and strong as well.”

Velcree:
“Maybe to you, Goku but I am second of the weakest in my group you see down there.”

Goku:
“No way!”

Velcree:
“Yes way and-” Velcree senses let her know before Goku could realize, “And we seem to have a little company.”

Velcree points over her right shoulder with her thumb without turning around. Goku didn’t have to strain his eyes too see who she was referring to.

Goku:
“Uub, Pan! Turn back now!”

From a short distance Gohan over hears his father.

Gohan:
“What did dad say…Pan?”

Gohan and the rest of the saiyans slowly rises a little bit off the ground to see if his father was wrong. But too his shocking surprise Goku wasn’t. Pan and Uub were now close enough to hear Goku’s plea…

Uub:
“Turn back master Goku? What’s wro-?”

Uub’s question is cut off as he notices his master was powered up to a super saiyan three, with his clothes torn and dirty. While Uub observed further, he notices that all of the saiyans were powered up as well. Then his eyes drifted past them and he saw the rest of the Z-members sprawled out on the ground unconscious like ragged dolls. Uub clearly now knows that trouble was a foot, but Pan didn’t…

Pan:
“Hi granddad and dad! Where’s mo-?”

Uub instantly stops Pan cheerful questions and says calmly as possible…

Uub:
“Pan, your granddad wants us to get back now. So let’s be off ok.”

Within a split moment, a second cloaked body shot from the ground and blocked the two youngsters’ path of escape.

Goku:
“Hold it Velcree! Whatever your grudge is with me, stays with me. Leave my granddaughter and Uub out of this.” Goku says giving Velcree a serious mean look.

Velcree:
“It is too late for that Goku. The only thing they have done was saved us the trouble of looking for them.”

Vegeta looks to his son and Goten.

Vegeta:
“Ok boys, now is the time we cut in, Gohan, you take the one blocking Uub and your daughter!”

Gohan:
“On it Vegeta!” Gohan say separating himself from them.

Trunks:
“Yeah, I’m right behind you dad!”

The three saiyans blasts themselves through the air at full speed towards the five combatants on the ground. But they soon were met halfway by three of the cloaked bodies as they voluntarily thrust themselves into the air. Now there were five out of eight cloaked creatures doing battle against five of earths’ strongest warriors on the planet; an yet with full contact they were now being knocked into the earth’s crust, making small craters as their bodies hit. But their extremely tough bodies didn’t give out, nor could their spirits be broken so easily.

All Uub could do was watch in shock while his mentor and friends get battered and beaten into the earth one by one. But still they would slowly pick themselves up and regain the fight by quickly pushing their bodies back into the sky. The three left over hooded beings stayed silent and motionless. They didn’t even seem concerned or bothered by the bodies streaking out the sky nearly striking them by mere feet. Meanwhile Pan asks Uub…

Goku:
“Uub, why are we just waiting here? We should be helping them.”

Uub:
“No Pan, we’re not. We are supposed to be getting out of here.” Uub’s shock then turns into explosive anger, “Pan, I’ve never disobeyed your granddad since he became my teacher but this time I must…I’m staying and I what you too get out of here.”

Pan:
“But Uub, I-”

Uub:
“No buts Pan, leave now. I’ll cover you.”

Down below, the cloaked being in the middle of the three turns his head to its’ right towards the one that stood next to it. Without saying a word, it then turns his head towards Uub who was nearly a hundred feet away in mid air and as it did Uub looked shockingly down at it…

Uub:
“What? It was like that creature heard me from way up here.”

The being on the creatures right slowly lifts its body into the air then quickly pushes itself in front of Uub, blocking his path. Soon after Goku’s body impacted the ground for the tenth time, he shakily makes it to his feet and feels that…

Goku:
(“Uub and Pan, they’re both still close.”) He then turned his head up an over where his keen scenes pulled him…(“There they are and Pan is backing away. Awe man, I won’t be able to reach them with Velcree blocking my path. Uub must be trying to give Pan a head start, while holding off that guy in front of him. But it won’t work, he’s just not strong enough.”) -“Uub! Why are you still here? I’m your master and mentor! You’re supposed to be listening to me!” Goku yells wanting them to leave.

Uub:
“Yes, I know! But you are also my friend, you all are! And I won’t stand by, an watch-”

Uub then sharply reaches down deep, deeper than he ever have in his life, well in this lifetime. Within seconds the skies darkening and the entire continent began to shake. Uub powered up so that an almost clear aura surrounded his body. But soon it turned hot pink, followed with his eyes as he finishes saying screaming loudly…

Uub:
“-AND I WON’T WATCH YOU DIE!!”

Goku quickly looks to Vegeta, who was being held by one of the creatures with one hand by the front of his shirt, an was about to get smashed back down to the planet…

Goku:
“Vegeta, Uub did it! He finally found his old power when he was formally Kid-Buu, but he is totally in control!”

Vegeta:
“Well its’ about blasted time, we are getting slaughtered up here!”

Velcree lowers herself to the ground and slowly walks over too Goku shaking her head…

Velcree:
“Goku, Goku, Goku. How quickly you have seemed to for gotten. Remember when I told you I was the second from the weakest. Well that creature who stands in front of the one you call Uub, is the second strongest. And I can since from here that you are going to need at least fifty of those little guys, just to make her sweat.”

Goku:
“NO-WAY!!”

Velcree:
“Again, yes way.”

Goku:
“And a creature that powerful, is a female as well?”

Velcree:
“Whoops, did I say female?”

Goku:
“No, you said ‘she’.”

Velcree:
“Well I guess I did, but I did not let the cat completely out of the bag.”

Goku:
“What are you talking about now Velcree?”

Velcree:
“Never mind, just sit back and watch an see what I mean.”

After Uub was powered up to his full strength, he instantly charges his opponent with his right arm reared back. Uub held back a punch that could easily split the moon in two but when his blow strikes the awaiting object in front of him, “BOOOOM!!”

The shockwave from the bone-shaking blow parted the clouds above and half a mile of the earths’ crust in a straight line below. But Uub’s punch only turned her face and head only a couple of inches. The unknown woman then turns her head back straight while his fist still laid on her cheek, moving him back in mid air. Uub then removes his fist and quickly continues his assault. He began to use a combination of punches and kicks all over an around his unmoving target. The sound was like a twenty-foot string of fireworks going off, but the sound was like a hundred army tanks being fired one behind the other. Uub’s harmless act has been going on for thirty seconds, but immediately was severed by the beings extraordinary serge of power. Within moments, Uub found himself hurdling out of control nearly two hundred and fifty feet from where he started threw the air. When Uub finally got control of his body and stopped himself suddenly in the air; he and the others on the ground were in total denial…

Goku:
“I…I can’t believe it!” Goku says shockingly.

Velcree:
“See what I mean Goku? Just one small flex of her power is enough to nearly send the boy in orbit.

AV:
[“AS THE FIVE SAIYANS HOLDS THAT LOOK ON THEY’RE FACES; YOU KNOW THE ONE I AM TALKING ABOUT, THE ONE WE ALL KNOW AN LOVE…YEAH THAT ONE. AND SOON THEY ALL STARTED THINKING THE SAME THING…NOW WHAT? WILL GOKU AND FRIENDS FINALLY TASTE DEFEAT? IF YOU REALLY WANT TO KNOW, JUST HOLD TIGHT FOR NEXT MIND-BLOWING EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE MORE BAD NEWS

CH: 14
MORE BAD NEWS

AV:
[“THE LAST TIME WE SAW OUR SUPER SAIYAN HEROES, THEY WERE BEING MAN-HANDLED BY STRANGERS THAT YOU COULD SEE; WAS NOT FROM OUR NECK OF THE WOODS ANDUUB’S ASSAULT ON ONE OF THE DARK SHROUDED ASAILLANTS WAS A NO-GO. AND TO TOP IT ALL OFF, IT WAS ANOTHER FEMALE AND HER POWER LEVEL SHOT PASSED UUB, THE FORMERLY DREADED MAJIN-BUU (A.K.A.) KID BUU. SO I HOPE YOU DRAGON BALL Z’ITES ARE PREPARED FOR SOME MORE HAIR RAISING EXCITEMENT, THAT’S GOING TO GRANTEE TO BOGGLE THE MIND…NOW, BACK TO THE SHOW.”]

The grip on Vegeta’s shirt loosens as the being holding him turns its head and witnesses his female comrade in action. When Vegeta notices it, he quickly tares himself away and heads for Goku. The creatures saw and knew this but didn’t pursue. Goku met Vegeta halfway in mid air…

Vegeta:
“Kakairot, even the power of Uub is no match for these creatures.”

Goku:
“I know Vegeta, so that’s why I came up with a plan. Be prepared to gather up the others. We got to get some distance between them and us. I’m going to hit them with a Solar Flare.” Goku says not looking away from Velcree.

Velcree:
“Solar Flare? What is that, some more of your firework display? Trust me, it will not work. You have apparently used everything you had just to keep me at bay, let alone the others, so just give it up.” Velcree says from a short distance away, putting her hands on her hips looking up at them.

Goku:
“Sorry Velcree, but giving up is something I don’t believe in.” Goku cuts his eyes at his friends and family.

Gohan, Goten, Trunks, Uub, Pan, and Vegeta understood what Goku was about to do, an began to slowly float closer to the unconscious Z-fighters.

Velcree:
“Well Goku, we await this Solar Flare of yours.” Velcree took her hands from her hips and folding the across her chest.

Goku immediately raises both of his fists to each side of his head at eye level.

Goku:
“SOOOLAAR-”

But before he could finish, one out of the two beings that didn’t make physical contact before, does now. It instantly disappears, then reappears directly in front of Goku and quickly smashes its’ fist into Goku's stomach. The blow knocked all the wind out of him, making him reeled forward cutting his words short and hair an eyes changed back to their normal color. As the being slowly removed its fist that was literally holding Goku up, he falls face first hard to the ground. Immediately Vegeta acts…

Vegeta:
“Gohan, do you know this…Solar Flare technique?”

Gohan:
“Yeah, why?”

Vegeta:
“Then stick to the plan. I will retrieve Kakairot.”

Gohan nods his head and held two closed fists to the side of his eyes then quickly extending his fingers wide.

Gohan:
“SOOLAAR FLA-” Gohan’s words were also silenced from the same being how hit his father. It was in front of him in a split second with its right hand griped tightly around Gohan's throat.

The Stranger:
“Sorry Gohan, I cannot let you escape with that blinding Solar Flare technique. My friends probably do not know about it, but I do.”

Gohan:
“H…how did y…you- hey, wa…wait a minute. I…I know that voice.” Gohan says with a surprised look.

The stranger:
“Yes Gohan, you do.”

The stranger reaches up with his left hand and pulled his hood down. An with complete shock, Gohan and Vegeta recognize the creatures face…

Gohan:
“A…android Seventeen? Gohan says while the grip around his neck loosens.

And from the ground a winded Goku finally stands to his feet and witnesses in disbelief while taking a deep breath…

Goku:
“Android Seventeen! I heard you were absorbed by cell, and then you were automatically destroyed when he self-destructed on King Kai’s small planet; where I took us.”

The second from the strongest being leaves the skies and lands next to them…

The mystery woman:
“Yes, that is he and there are many more surprises a head.”
The woman removes her hood walking closer to him; Goku had to look up in order to see into her eyes and when he saw her face, he swears to himself that he has seen her before…

Goku:
“Don’t I know you?”

The mystery woman:
“Yes, you do. Maybe this will help you remember.” The woman placing her left open palm over his forehead and as she did she created a glowing light blue small ball of energy in its center. It suddenly arose out of her hand and circled his head, making his eyes turn light-blue. Goten and Trunks flies next to Vegeta.

Trunks:
“Dad, what are they doing to Goku?” Trunks tries to rub the pain out of his right arm.

Vegeta:
“I do not know son, but if they wanted to kill us. We would be dead already.”

A few moments pass and the energy ball around Goku’s head faded in to nothing as his eyes changed back to normal. Goku’s entire body was healed; an out of his mouth came with a big smile…

Goku:
“O-yeah, now I remember you. You’re Nala!” Goku had to stand on his toes in order to give Nala a proper hug.

Goten:
“Vegeta! Trunks! Did you guys hear that?”

Vegeta:
“That we did Goten and I want-No, demand answers!”

Goku:
“Hey you guys, get over here! Everything’s all right, these are the good guys!” Goku says turning and waving to his friends and family too come closer. He then turns back to Nala and asked looking around, “Nala, if you are here, then where is-”

A voice says from a far:
“I am here Uncle Kakairot.”

An when Goku looked passed Nala, he notices Deannar pulling his hood down exposing his face walking towards them.

Goku:
“Deannar, I knew if I saw Nala that you wouldn’t be far.”

Vegeta, Gohan, Trunks, Goten, Pan and Uub took an un-fore-sure flight and lands around Goku. Pan quickly runs over to Goku and hugs his right leg tightly…

Vegeta:
“Explain yourself Kakairot!” Vegeta grabs Goku’s left arm from behind.

Goku:
“Well, like I said Vegeta, this is Nala-” Goku points to his niece, “And over there, walking this way is Deannar, her older brother. And the rest of them are their childhood friends. The one who is already exposed over there is Velcree.” As each one of them brought down they’re hoods, “This is Franok, Wanaka, Kulp, and Ghusta. An man has you guys grown, especially you and Nala, Deannar. You’re both twice as big as me.”

Goten:
“But dad, how can Deannar and Nala be related to us?”

Vegeta:
“Yes Kakairot, do tell us. Because we are all just dying to know.”

Deannar:
“That will have to be explained on the way prince Vegeta.”

Deannar walks in the middle of the small crowd while bowing his head towards Vegeta. Vegeta’s eyes followed Deannar’s body as it goes down then up…

Vegeta:
“Where are we going Deannar?

Before Deannar answered he made his eyes glow light green. An in a moment’s notice the standing saiyan bodies glowed light green as well, while he answers…

Deannar:
“Uncle Kakairot told me long ago of a place on earth where a years training can be completed in one day.”

When Deannar completed talking, his eyes changed back to their light brown color and the light green glow around the three saiyans bodies faded, signaling that their healing process was done.

Vegeta:
“Amazing.” Vegeta gasped standing without a mark on him.

Goku:
“Yeah, it’s at Dende’s lookout.”

Vegeta:
“But what do you need it for, not for training or to improve yourselves I bet?”

Deannar:
“Then you would have won that bet my prince. On the contrary, it is for all of you.” Anything all of them could do was stand there and listens on as Deannar explained more, “Yes, all of you must be trained to become stronger. You are all very powerful beings but not strong as you will be.”

Gohan:
“You almost sound like we don’t have a choice Deannar.” Gohan says looking at Deannar.

Deannar:
“That is correct cousin Gohan, you do not.” Deannar pauses as he watches the five saiyan-dumbfounded face and then continues, “My grandfather told Uncle Kakairot that a storm was coming. Well it is not on its way anymore, it is here. He tried everything in his power to make sure earth stayed out of its’ dangers swaying course. One of those ways was to keep large power levels from getting any larger than they were. Another was to erasing certain parts of Uncle Kakairots' memory and plant false ones to fill in the gaps on where he was. Large power levels attracted the storm, and that storm in which I speak is absorbing parts of this galaxy and hundreds of others just like this one. And if anyone or anything refuses to give way or be absorbed, it or they will be destroyed utterly. Those robotic creatures and the one called Eider were power locators; in other words…scouts. They are sent out all over the universe with special super technology. That in its design finds and locate suitable power sources and obtain them too add to an army that already numbers in the billions.”

Goku:
“So what you are saying is that this storm, are an army people?”

Deannar:
“In a way, yes. They are creatures from all across the universe with powers much like your own. They are hunted, captured and implanted with an alien technology that could multiply their powers fifty or a hundred times their normal strength.”

Trunks:
“But how is that possible Deannar? Shouldn’t that burn them out?”

Deannar:
“It is the implants; they unlock the minds secrets of evolving and learning. When the mind knows its true limits, the body will automatically follow.”

Vegeta:
“Hump. That does not sound so bad, if you ask me.” Vegeta says folding his arms.

Deannar:
“Well my prince, if you insist on being a mindless slave and I did not find you in time. Your wish would have come true and then…you would have became my enemy.”

Vegeta:
“And you would have battled me, even if my powers were increased by a hundred?”

Deannar:
“No prince Vegeta. If you had been captured, all of you would have been captured and enslaved. So I would not have battled you all, I would have killed you all, whenever and where ever we crossed paths.”

Trunks:
“Don’t you mean tried to kill us Deannar? With all of our powers combined at a hundred, I don’t believe just you alone can do that.”

Before Deannar could speak…

Goku:
“Believe it Trunks. When I first came to their world, Deannar nearly took my head off. An to think, we were both powered up as a normal super saiyans; but even then I knew he was stronger. I found out later that he was a super saiyan years before me. Up against him then, I was the student and he was the teacher. To make things a little bit more scarier, he was around your age back then and he held back.”

Trunks:
“Wow, really?”

Vegeta:
“I too believe he would son, even destroy members of his own family. Because I can tell by the way he walk, talk and by his actions. Besides, I have not seen him crack a smile since they came here. I have seen men this way before, but not for a long time.”

Nala:
“Never mind him prince Vegeta. Sometimes I do not even know my brothers true emotions.” Nala bends down and extending her arm towards Pan.

Pan hides behind her grandfathers’ leg while peeking around it at Nala…

Nala:
“Take my hand little cousin. I will not let any harm befall you.” Nala says with a soft soothing voice.

Pan looks up at Goku as he looks down at her.

Goku:
“It’s ok Pan, Nala’s a part of our fami-”

Deannar:
“Time is something we have very little of, we must gather the others. There is much training to be done and battles to be waged, an a war to win.”

Pan quickly rushes to Nala and leaps around her neck an holds on to her cousin.

Nala:
“Hold on tight little one. I will retrieve your mother; Deannar can be such a grouch.” Nala says smiling.

Pan:
“Ok.” Pan says in a babyish voice while Deannar shows no emotions to his sisters’ comment.

Nala then disappears and reappears next to Videl, who laid fifteen meters away. Pan quickly leaves Nala’s neck jumping down to her mother. When not far behind Deannar and Goku, Vegeta follows and thinks to himself while cutting his eyes in a certain some ones direction…

Vegeta:
(“Hum, this Deannar does have saiyan blood in his veins, I can feel it. But who is his father, Bardock had many sons?”)

After everyone had a Z-fighter in his or her arms…

Deannar:
“Now Uncle Kakairot, where is this…Dende’s lookout?”

Goku:
“Well, it’s-”

As soon as Goku thought about Dende’s lookout location, Deannar places his left hand on his shoulder; in an instant they disappear. Within a moment’s notice they were standing on Dende’s lookout. And in four more seconds Deannar’s crew arrived with the unconscious Z-fighters. Sixty seconds pass as Deannar and his sister looked over the almost floating Plato.

Deannar:
“Nala, will you heal and wake the others?”

Nala:
“Yes Deannar, they will be ready for you in a few seconds.”

Everyone watched as Nala lifts her arms and makes a fist. She then unrolls her first and second finger holding them closely together, an points them at the six unconscious Z-members. Her eyes then began to glow loud green and soon after, so did the bodies of the Z- fighters. When Nala turned her hand over facing the sky and lifted her two fingers upward. All of their bodies levitated four feet off the ground and began to heal. An as they healed, within five seconds they all started to come too…

Krillin:
“Awe man…what hit me?” Krillin’s body like all the others were being turned upright onto their feet as they stirred into consciousness. The just waking Z-team didn’t seem to notice Deannar or his sister, all except Piccolo and Dende. Dende was standing and staring in the lookouts' doorway not making a sound while Piccolo stood to his feet not believing what he was seeing. Dende slowly but quietly moved his way to Piccolo’s side…

Dende:
“Uh…Piccolo. I am, seeing what you are seeing, right?” Dende whispers as he walks to Piccolo’s right side and stops.

Piccolo:
“I was just about to ask you the same thing kid. I never would have guessed that they would come here.” Piccolo says under his breath.

Dende:
“I truly understand what you mean Piccolo, they’re power is unphantomable. It is hidden from the saiyans, android, and humans but not from us.”

Piccolo:
“Maybe it’s hidden from them because they don’t know the truth on what has happen and what’s really going on.”

Dende:
“What do you mean Piccolo?”

Piccolo:
“What I’m saying is that they don’t even realize what they are looking at. Those two creatures over there are hybrids of a Supreme Kai and saiyan. And I can only answer on partly why they are here.”

Dende:
“If you know something Piccolo, you can tell me what it is.”

Piccolo:
“Well it’s like this Dende, before I got knocked on my ass. I felt something that the others couldn’t. It was the feeling of a Supreme Kai, but twisted pure uncensored evil. Even worse than my old counterpart King Piccolo. It even puts Cell and Majin-Buu power to shame.”

Dende:
“What, that can’t be possible?”

AV:
[“OH BUT IT IS DENDE AND THERE’S MORE BUDDING OF TRUTH IN THE NEXT EPISODE OF DRAGON BALL Z’S FAMILY TIES.”]

NEXT EPISODE
NAMEK II


Writer's Full Name: Quentin

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